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Reviews For My Enemy's Enemy
Author's Response: Glad you're liking Connor so far. I was a bit nervous about using an OC to be honest but hopefully he will become a well rounded character as more about him is revealed gradually as the fic progresses...
Nice story,I like it! Author's Response: glad you're enjoying the fic Yeah Connor's kinda crazy at times...more to come on him soon cheers for reviewing :)
Next to that, perhaps this sounds strange to you (as the one in control of the whole plotline :-), but after having Harry grieve so violently just a short while back, I expected some sort of lasting fallout (whether for better or worse)? You described his emotions so vividly. Yes Snape kept him occupied, but he also made things worse. From the broom incident on Harry is suddenly so complacent, too complacent. I'm not sure how to put this, really, I'm a bit frustrated. I guess Harry changes towards Snape (more accepting of his decisions and power over him, having strong feelings as shown by him saving Snape) but I don't see anything in Snape's behaviour to warrent this change from Harry. Euh.. something like that.. ;-) Looking forward to the next chapter, and where you will take this storyline.(Especially curious to see what kind of temper tantrum Draco will throw!) Author's Response: Hey Kari thanks for your review. I think I know what you're saying. I wish I'd put in a bit more depth to what Harry was thinking in the last chapter. I will try to address this in the next one though. Harry hasn't forgotten the broom incident - that will come up again soon. As far as Harry's changed feelings to Snape go. This is how I'm thinking: He's particularly vulnerable at the moment after what happened with Sirius and really craves the simple support Snape has been giving him -talking things through, dealing with nightmares etc. It takes a scarily small amount to make Harry feel extremely grateful. In addition to this Harry's eyes have been opened to how heroic Snape's role is for the Order (allowing himself to be tortured and injured etc). It doesn't occur to Harry to feel that Snape owes him something for saving his life, he just worries that next time he might not make it. As I say hopefully I'll explore some of this a bit more soon. Oh and there's definately gonna be some interesting Draco moments on the way! Cheers for reviewing - your comments highlighted some stuff I was thinking myself...:)
Horrible nightmares! But you wrote them well. Poor Harry, having to move into Slytherin but it's not as bad as it could have been! I think the last dream was a vision which means Sirius might still be alive!!! Mind you, something else could happen to him yet...*mutters darkly* Great chapter! Author's Response: Your review really made me smile:) Yeah Donovan is going to be a bit of a loose cannon trying to stir up trouble... Slytherin aren't gonna know what's hit them what with him and Harry. Um... I can't really comment too much on your last comment just yet but I'm glad you're enjoying it and really appreciate you taking the time to review.
Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter will probably be in a week cos I'm off on hol for 5 days but I have started it. Hopefully i should be quite interesting as things kick off a bit in Slytherin lol... Cheers for reviewing it means a lot
Love it! Can't wait for the next chappie. Author's Response: No he doesn't know yet. There will definitely be fireworks on the way...despite Snape being confident that 'Slytherins don't hex one another'! :) |
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