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Reviews For My Enemy's Enemy
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Keep up the good work. Author's Response: I hope you don't think he gets too soft in the next chapter then, there's one bit in the middle which might be a little mushy before he reverts to normal... Thanks lots for taking the time to review. Next chapter is now up :)
Harry shrugged. ‘I’ve been in Gryffindor until about five minutes ago.’ ‘And yet curfew was fifteen minutes ago.’ Snape observed drily. I can imagine the expression on his face as he said it!! Can't wait for the Harry-Malfoy showdown (and Snape's reaction!!) and I really can't wait for the next chapter because it was a cliffie *sobs* and I really want to see what Harry says! Great chapter! Author's Response: Good -I'm glad it seemed to show what's going through Harry's head. Yes -it'll be interesting to have Snape trying to deal appropiately with Harry & Malfoy. No ones gonna like the outcome... Ah the cliffie - Snape's not gonna be a happy bunny. At all. Ta very much for reviewing:)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :) Yeah what Harry tried to do to Draco was pretty dumb and Snape is gonna be less than impressed. The Connor stuff is just going on in the background at the mo but we'll find out more about him soon...
Author's Response: Yes I think the fact that Harry was grieving was crucial to him not protesting at the move to Slytherin. He feels very vulnerable and wants to be able to continue to spend time with Snape (even if there is still a lot of mixed emotions in what he feels towards him at the moment). His grief would have also meant it was easier for Harry to get carried along by what Snape wanted him to do. However, if Harry was totally opposed to the idea he would have been more assertive in refusing it, and demanded to speak to Dumbledore, even if he was told he had no choice. Harry is more annoyed that Snape manipulated him than the fact he has ended up in Slytherin, although that may change depending how badly he and Snape fall out in the next chapter. Thanks a lot for reviewing:)
I like your writing style and the plot. The only problem at all that I find is that I wish for more detail about what the main characters are thinking and feeling. Harry was angry about Snape's gift of the broom, but I wasn't sure exactly what Snape thought. Was he hurt by Harry's reaction? Was he trying to apologize? And how come Harry just got angry in his dorm and then seems to have totally forgotten about the whole thing? But all in all, this is a good story. Please continue updating quickly. Thanks. Author's Response: Ah the broomstick saga won't end there, they will discuss it more in the next chapter, it's kind of simmering at the surface at the moment. Harry is really upset deep down about the whole thing but keeps being distracted by things which come up (Snape being injured, the strange spell) but he's going to bring it up eventually.(That and the fact that Snape lied to get him into Slytherin.) We'll find out more about what Snape was thinking in the next chapter, but I think it's safe to say that he is sorry although apologises don't come easily to him... Thanks for reviewing :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
I'm so looking forward to a confrontation between Harry and Malfoy, but I'm worried that Harry is going to be in big trouble with Snape. It seems as though he's already in trouble though, isn't he? Great chappie, can't wait for the next one. Author's Response: Hey Pandora, Yeah he's already in pretty deep trouble, he didn't really think about what the consequences of what he was trying to do to Malfoy... Snape is not a happy fella at the beginning of the next chapter, that's for sure. Hmm the Harry/Malfoy thing is gonna be fun to write I think... On one level it's not nearly as dangerous as what Harry's just tried to do to Malfoy but on the other it's more of an example of direct disobedience. Tempers will be running high for everyone concerned! Thanks for reviewing :) |
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