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Title: Repercussions 27 Aug 2009 5:46 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this chapter!! And yes, I think it's totally realistic, both that Snape might make him do it and that Harry would be upset. Well done. :-)

    Author's Response:

    Cheers for your reviews :) Glad you enjoyed it and that you think it's IC...

Title: Repercussions 27 Aug 2009 4:19 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    i think its realistic that harry is upset about killing mice especially because he is doing it on purpose and he knows that he really doesnt want to do it.

    Snape does seem a little bit horrible forcing him to do this but harry needs to learn that he cant just try out curses on people with out understanding the consequences.

    you've written this chapter really well, the only thing is that i want to read more!!! =D

    Author's Response:

    Heya thanks for your review -it put a smile on my face :)

    Good, I'm glad you think it's realistic, on one hand people kill mice in traps every day and at Hogwarts they constantly have to cut up horrible things in potions lessons - so I didn't want to make Harry seem too much of a wimp. But as you say the fact he's doing the spell deliberately despite knowing what effect it will have...

    Yeah Snape is a bit horrible at times. I still love the git though. Craziness I tell you.

     

     

     


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