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Title: Atonement 26 Mar 2011 3:25 am
Reviewer: Yasona Black (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is amazing. I read it all the way through the most recent chapter and wasn't going to review, but considering hours later I was still thinking it, I thought I should. It's a terrific story, the characters seem very IC to me and it progresses really well. The only thing that bothers me is that how did Harry learn the Imperious curse? Unless perhaps I missed something? I really hope you have a chance to update this soon. :)

    Author's Response:

    Heya thanks for your review sorry it's taken me ages to respond!

    Well the way I saw it was that unforgivables are primarily about having the intention to use them, more than anything else. Like in cannon it's implied that Harry could have used Crucio properly if he had truly wanted to...

     Anyway the new chapter is now up. Hope you like it :)

Title: What lies ahead 25 Mar 2011 3:40 pm
Reviewer: Mess of me (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey! I'm the daughter of a grammar teacher and it really gets on my nerves when someone dosn't punctuate correctly. You know tha quotation marks? They look like "this", not 'this'. It makes it hard to read with 'this'. Okay? Thanks for reading my reveiw.

    Author's Response:

    FYI cut and pasted from wikipedia:

    Traditionally, a quotation mark is written as a pair of opening and closing marks in either of two styles: single (‘…’) or double ("…"). Both styles are common in the English language; however, the single and double styling is considered to be the standard in British and American English respectively.

    I have actually switched to using ("...") in later chapters, but technically ('...') *isn't* wrong.

Title: Atonement 23 Mar 2011 3:24 am
Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I spent the afternoon and most of the night and today reading it. I love it, just couldn't stop. I am so sad to be caught up to your writing. Please update soon. I can't wait for Harry and Severus to get back on good terms. Is Harry going to tell Sev about the Animigas? Can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Hey Ann. Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far. The new chapter is now up. Lots of Harry/Severus to follow as well- you're right there's a lot of discussions that they need to have.
Title: True to oneself 18 Mar 2011 6:28 am
Reviewer: Shh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    sigh - I guess up until this chapter I was living in denial - I had thought since Sirius went missing in Ireland, and this new odd student showed up from Ireland, that maybe there was hope for Sirius stil... sob. sniffle (poor Snuffles)...

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review! The new chapter is now up :)
Title: Repercussions 18 Mar 2011 6:14 am
Reviewer: Shh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmmm - would it bother Harry to pointlessly kill mice... he has experience with potion ingredients and they are just mice - but I think he'd be soft hearted enough to not want to kill anything - and it would freak him out that they were alive one second and 'gone' the next - so good job calling this one. Spot on
Title: Sirius 18 Mar 2011 5:19 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OH NO, not Sirius!! I LOVED the milk incident - that was so funny! Perfect Snape!
Title: Atonement 10 Mar 2011 9:01 pm
Reviewer: ceccecblue (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a bloody good story, you write so beautifully and have left us all hanging on the ledge waiting to find out how the situation's going to resolve itself! :)
    oh and Dumbledore's evil, Brilliant!
    Yours, Eagerly awaiting another chapter.
    CF x

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Sorry it's taken so long to update, but the new chapters done at last! :)

Title: Atonement 10 Feb 2011 1:15 am
Reviewer: crystal (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, Im really digging this story. I'm waiting for them to all find out the truth completely now. Harry being and Animagus along with Connor. Will be interesting.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! The new chapter's now up!

Title: Atonement 22 Jan 2011 4:23 pm
Reviewer: Hiimagiraffe (Signed) [Report This]
    How ofte do you usually update?

    Author's Response:

    Usually once a month... however I must hold my hands up and admit to being extremely slow on the most recent one.

    Having said that my new chapter is now up and is very, very long.

Title: Atonement 20 Jan 2011 9:46 am
Reviewer: Rs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is so gripping! Please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Sorry it's taken so long to update, but the new chapters done at last! :)


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