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Title: The best thing ever 30 Dec 2009 2:38 am
Reviewer: spiritualwitch (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you misspelled the caretaker's name. You spelled his name as 'Finch' but it's 'Filch' (unless you were referring to a different character). Great story progression! Harry and Severus really can get along. I think I would prefer shorter chapters more often, so long as the shorter chapters don't end in a cliffy. That would just be unsatisfying unless the cilffy was at the end of a long chapter.

    Author's Response:

    You're right, it should be Filch- not sure where that came from!

    Well, I will see what happens and perhaps go for a middle ground...

    The cliffy point it interesting. I always try to have a chapter add something to the story and leave an idea of where things might go next. Sometimes people have said my chapters end in a cliffy when I haven't seen them as being that way at all. However I can't deny the last one *was* a cliffy and I do understand too many might get annoying. I will bear it in mind...

Title: The Storm (Part 2) 29 Dec 2009 8:25 pm
Reviewer: spiritualwitch (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for attacking Snape! I love when Harry stands up for himself.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! My thinking throughout this fic is that he's at an age where there is a lot of defiance pent up inside him, even if the way his uncle treated him has made him vulnerable and scared.

    I hope you continue to read on. In a few chapters you'll get to the scene that kind of prompted me to write this fic. It's basically my take on Harry smashing up Dumbledore's office ... only this time it's Snape's house.

     

Title: The Storm (Part 1) 29 Dec 2009 8:21 pm
Reviewer: spiritualwitch (Signed) [Report This]
    Does Severus even care about whatever Harry has gone through? How can he still treat Harry in such a way?! A lovely view of Bastard! Snape in this chapter and I hope to see a lot less of him in the future.

    Author's Response: He's pretty blisteringly unsympathetic at this point, isn't he? Snape will never be 'nice' in this fic, but he will definately become more caring towards Harry as it goes on...
Title: The calm before the storm 29 Dec 2009 8:18 pm
Reviewer: spiritualwitch (Signed) [Report This]
    I believe the spell is 'legilimens'. Maybe Severus actually cares about Harry if he's worried Harry might get hurt on his broom. Of course, given the location of this fic, I hope they will start to get along soon.
Title: What lies ahead 29 Dec 2009 8:14 pm
Reviewer: spiritualwitch (Signed) [Report This]
    You spelled Gryffindor wrong but I can ignore that in favor of the awesomeness of the chapter :D. I do love Snape though sometimes he can be a bastard.
Title: Into the Lion's Den 29 Dec 2009 8:10 pm
Reviewer: spiritualwitch (Signed) [Report This]
    Shocking that I've never read this fic before. If it hadn't updated, I might never have found it. Not much to say at this point but a good start to a hopefully good fic.
Title: The best thing ever 29 Dec 2009 10:18 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I have a really bad feeling about their excursion. I understand why Conner wants to keep his animagus shape a secret but they really should have told someone what they are planning to do. This cannot be a good idea.

    Author's Response:

    It's not very sensible or safe is it? But there's no chance Harry will let that put him off...

    Cheers for taking the time to review :)

Title: Familial influence 29 Dec 2009 9:46 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't have the books in front of me, but in 4 he did call them crabbe and goyle. Even in book 1, prior to be sorted he introduced them to harry by their last names. Great chapter. Post soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, yes I'm glad I didn't start putting their first names in after all lol :)

    Glad you liked the chapter

Title: The best thing ever 29 Dec 2009 2:31 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoo-hoo! Another chapter! Personally, I'd rather have shorter chapters more often. The story flows better for me, that way.

    Oooh, I don't even know what to think. Harry's plans never go as well for him as he wishes or thinks they will. Something will go wrong. I wonder though if Sirius really is alive... should be interesting to find out!

    Keep up the awesome work!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    Yes I know, long gaps aren't the best thing in the world for any fic.

    No, Harry's not got the best of luck, has he? We'll have to wait and see about Sirius...

Title: The best thing ever 29 Dec 2009 12:33 am
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed) [Report This]
    personaly i would rather have short updates more often. I'm realy enjoying this story, but the wait for new chapters is KILLING ME!!! LOL.

    cant wait for the next chapie!!!

    Hugs 4 u if u update soon!!!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'd best get writing then... lol :)

    Seriously though I will try not to let it go so long between chapters cos I know that can be frustrating.

     I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.


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