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Title: Confrontation and Pain 28 Jul 2009 6:10 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Hiii!!!!! Love this chapter, love the birth mark, love the cutting. Much goodness. If you want any advise about how to keep the cutting thing realistic, I have a good bit of personal experience that I don't mind sharing. Feline trouble should definitely remain yours. I don't like it when a fic changes style all the time from different authors writing it. On Draco - do you mean in this fic, or in Feline trouble? If in this fic - too soon to tell, ask again after the two have interacted a little in the fic. I personally like Drarrys, but it's got to work in the fic. If the other - the relationship could go either way, but mates would feel a little weird to me, I dunno why. :-)

    Author's Response: I meant this story. Feline trouble they've already ended up as friends and perhaps brothers. Also, thanks for the review and the advice on if I should keep FT mine. I'll let you know about the cutting thing though.
Title: Confrontation and Pain 28 Jul 2009 3:22 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow, another cliffie. If you were so darned brilliant, I'd be upset with you.

    I'd like to see Harry and Draco just be friends. Not into Draco as a brother or lover. Actually, you do a good job with your story, but I'm not usually into Draco at all.

    By brother do you mean that Snape would adopt the two of them? I guess that that wouldn't be too bad. They would both drive Snape crazy with their antics. Yeah, could be fun. Hmm....yeah all the pranks that they could pull could make an interesting story.

    Author's Response: Sorry Pandora, but friends only got two votes as well as the fact that I didn't even put that up as a option. *giggles* Don't you mean 'weren't' in your second sentence? Thanks for the Review btw.
Title: Confrontation and Pain 28 Jul 2009 3:08 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh. Well at least Severus knows now to remove any sharp objects from Harry's vicinity like they do on suicide watch.

    Great chapter by the way!

    I like your Feline series, but if you would like other people to write stories for it, by all means do so.

    I think Draco and Harry are great as brothers.

    Update soon. Oh and did you know your chapter is all italicized? You might want to fix it.

    Author's Response: It is? Thanks for telling me. And thanks for the Review. Hmmm....

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