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Reviews For The Runner
Author's Response: Well, hope you like it when I do put it out. TftR.
Author's Response: It'll be up evetually. TftR though.
I hate it when Harry has nightmares, it's so sad. I hope you don't torture him like I did in Heir though. Can't wait for Sev to hug him next chappie. Author's Response: Hug? Sev? .... Anyway, in Heir the dreams were a biiiig part of the story line. So no I won't torture Harry. TftR though.
I'm thinking it is just me, but what is the plot of the story so that I am better able to follow. Author's Response: For one, Harry isn't doing drugs but running them. Basiaclly Harry has become addicted to alcohol, and his uncle is badly abusing him. Sev rescues him, and brings him to Snape Manor. Right now they are just trying to get comfortable with one another.
Anyway, that's not a criticism. I really like the chapter, though it was short. :0) Author's Response: Have you forgotten that Vernon is now in the hands of the Order? Number Four is empty. But I was extremely exhausted today, so I didn't do as well as I could. Glad you liked, TftR!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I could've done better on the length though. That was a depressingly short chapter...a 900 odd words or so. But TftR anyways. |
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