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Title: Nightmares and Breakfast 11 Sep 2009 8:22 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I know you said you weren't sure how yu were going with the next chapter but I do look forward to it!

    Author's Response: Well, hope you like it when I do put it out. TftR.
Title: Nightmares and Breakfast 27 Aug 2009 4:56 am
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it can not wait for the next part of the story.

    Author's Response: It'll be up evetually. TftR though.
Title: Nightmares and Breakfast 13 Aug 2009 10:40 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Funny, that's what I had for breakfast this morning. With raisins and walnuts and cinnamon. MMM!

    I hate it when Harry has nightmares, it's so sad. I hope you don't torture him like I did in Heir though. Can't wait for Sev to hug him next chappie.

    Author's Response: Hug? Sev? .... Anyway, in Heir the dreams were a biiiig part of the story line. So no I won't torture Harry. TftR though.
Title: Nightmares and Breakfast 12 Aug 2009 5:13 am
Reviewer: Moongrl (Signed) [Report This]
    ok, so I have tried to follow along but there is almost too much happening at once to follow. I am kinda feeling that some plots have fallen through the cracks. I thought at first the story was about Harry with drugs, his problems with them, the things his uncle has done to him, and snape finding him. Their interaction at the house has addressed the drugs all of once and even then the chapter to me was a bit confusing.

    I'm thinking it is just me, but what is the plot of the story so that I am better able to follow.

    Author's Response: For one, Harry isn't doing drugs but running them. Basiaclly Harry has become addicted to alcohol, and his uncle is badly abusing him. Sev rescues him, and brings him to Snape Manor. Right now they are just trying to get comfortable with one another.
Title: Nightmares and Breakfast 11 Aug 2009 5:21 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I did like the chapter, though I was surprised that Harry didn't wake Sev to ask him to protect the Dursleys. (Or at least think about it, even if he doesn't mind them getting caught.) Surely he could have figured out whose wards Voldi would be watching?

    Anyway, that's not a criticism. I really like the chapter, though it was short. :0)

    Author's Response: Have you forgotten that Vernon is now in the hands of the Order? Number Four is empty. But I was extremely exhausted today, so I didn't do as well as I could. Glad you liked, TftR!
Title: Nightmares and Breakfast 11 Aug 2009 4:17 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    WOndeful as always! Poor, poor Harry! I can't wait to see what's next!

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I could've done better on the length though. That was a depressingly short chapter...a 900 odd words or so. But TftR anyways.

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