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Title: After Effects and The Library 31 Jul 2009 12:44 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad to see Severus acting responsibly and making sure Harry had no more knives to cut himself with and that he did offer to talk if Harry wanted to. At least he didn't yell and sneer at him.

    I wonder what Harry found in the library book? Something about his scar?

    Hey have you read my latest updates to RPM and 2HH hunting?

    Author's Response: Not yet. And I did say Birth Mark not scars :P. Thanks for the review. Keep checking for updates and I'll do the same :).
Title: Confrontation and Pain 28 Jul 2009 6:10 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Hiii!!!!! Love this chapter, love the birth mark, love the cutting. Much goodness. If you want any advise about how to keep the cutting thing realistic, I have a good bit of personal experience that I don't mind sharing. Feline trouble should definitely remain yours. I don't like it when a fic changes style all the time from different authors writing it. On Draco - do you mean in this fic, or in Feline trouble? If in this fic - too soon to tell, ask again after the two have interacted a little in the fic. I personally like Drarrys, but it's got to work in the fic. If the other - the relationship could go either way, but mates would feel a little weird to me, I dunno why. :-)

    Author's Response: I meant this story. Feline trouble they've already ended up as friends and perhaps brothers. Also, thanks for the review and the advice on if I should keep FT mine. I'll let you know about the cutting thing though.
Title: Confrontation and Pain 28 Jul 2009 3:22 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow, another cliffie. If you were so darned brilliant, I'd be upset with you.

    I'd like to see Harry and Draco just be friends. Not into Draco as a brother or lover. Actually, you do a good job with your story, but I'm not usually into Draco at all.

    By brother do you mean that Snape would adopt the two of them? I guess that that wouldn't be too bad. They would both drive Snape crazy with their antics. Yeah, could be fun. Hmm....yeah all the pranks that they could pull could make an interesting story.

    Author's Response: Sorry Pandora, but friends only got two votes as well as the fact that I didn't even put that up as a option. *giggles* Don't you mean 'weren't' in your second sentence? Thanks for the Review btw.
Title: Confrontation and Pain 28 Jul 2009 3:08 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh. Well at least Severus knows now to remove any sharp objects from Harry's vicinity like they do on suicide watch.

    Great chapter by the way!

    I like your Feline series, but if you would like other people to write stories for it, by all means do so.

    I think Draco and Harry are great as brothers.

    Update soon. Oh and did you know your chapter is all italicized? You might want to fix it.

    Author's Response: It is? Thanks for telling me. And thanks for the Review. Hmmm....
Title: Curiosity 26 Jul 2009 11:55 pm
Reviewer: Woodi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, I have wanted to read something like that for quite long time. Alcohol, drugs, abuse..there are not many stories with these topics, so I am glad You are writing this story. BTW you have good way of writing, I like it. I look forward new chapters..

    Author's Response: Heh, thanks. And Thanks for the Review. I hope you can be patient, because I put them out as soon as I write them. And writing them is proving to be more difficult then I realized. The update will be up soon, though. I will try to make sure it is before Friday to keep with my weekly updates.
Title: Curiosity 25 Jul 2009 5:06 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I've read that book, It's a really good one. I like how you had Severus and Poppy intereact and I think Albus had better come up with some pretty good reasons why he neglected to check on Harry because Sev is going to be so mad.

    I hope Severus is going to go a little easy on Harry. The kid is really messed up.

    Speaking of updates, I just updated Two hawks.

    Author's Response: *giggles* Well, now that is what I call a review. Indeed, Sev is going to be furious. And just wait and see. Y'know I never tell my plot-line before I've got it written out. *goes to read 2HH* Thanks for the Review.
Title: Curiosity 25 Jul 2009 3:01 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    You terrible, terrible person. You ended with a cliffie ON PURPOSE????

    Author's Response: *rofls* Yes, I ended on a cliffie on purpose. *a dolphin like creature squeaks at Baghi* No, I didn't say porpoise! I hope you keep reading, and thanks for the review.
Title: Curiosity 25 Jul 2009 2:28 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that was short but sweet. I'm curious to see if Snape softens up a little bit towards Harry.


    You did leave us on a cliffie, now didn't you? That just means that you have to update quickly now.

    Author's Response: *giggles* Well, we'll see. I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks for the Review, glad you liked.
Title: Dementors and their consequence 04 Jul 2009 7:43 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I like!! I mean, obviously depressing, but nice. I like how you don't over-write it too much. (Don't ask me to explain what I mean by that, 'cause I can't explain it :-) ) Anyway, good stuff! Keep it up!

    Author's Response: Why can't you explain it? Nevermind. I'm just glad you like the stories. Hope you keep reading, and I am sorry for the cliffies. Thanks for the Review.
Title: Dementors and their consequence 04 Jul 2009 5:56 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! I feel so bad for him. he's gone down a dark road and lost his way. But I think Severus will be able to help him find the way back.

    Evil Vernon! I hope whatever spell Snape cast on him makes the fat walrus suffer!

    Author's Response: :P If Snape had the freedom to cast other spells, Vernon would get it alot worse. But because of the laws, Sev can't attack him without reprecussions. And what help to Harry would Sev be in Azkaban? Thanks for your Review btw.

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