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Reviews For 3 Slytherin Marauders
I've really enjoyed reading these 101 chapters, and I really look forward to reading the chapters that are to come. You have an amazing descriptive voice and it caught on particular scene in my head. The one of Harry falling from the cliff and changing (albeit unwillingly) into his animagus form. I couldn't help myself, and I drew a fan-art: http://tomorrowwriter.deviantart.com/art/Falling-244218044 I hope you like it. :) I do now intend to colour it. I can't bare to see it so bland and liney. :) Author's Response: Thank you for the art - it is a neat picture - reminds me a little of the scene in Ladyhawke where the girl turns into a hawk (it helped inspire the whole plot regarding Harry's animagus form).
I like the emphasis on Ron's jealousy putting him at odds and the gradual changes as he matures. Neville in place of Draco is genius and a very natural consequence of the circumstances. I've barely touched everything that impressed me. I'll summarize by saying: I think this is the best alteration in motivation and subsequent change in the story line I have come across to date. I am really looking forward to future chapters. Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. I always enjoy exploring character's possible motivations and what might occur if their motivations change.
Author's Response: Yep, HEHEHE
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