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Reviews For 3 Slytherin Marauders
Author's Response: I had to help a friend ''think of a way out" at one time, luckily he got tossed in jail and she had plenty of time to get away.
I really LIKE it so far! I do think the two boys are acting a little old for their age, but other than that, it's enjoyable. I'm very eager to see how your portrayal of Snape will be. :D
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Petunia is very believable as a wife afraid of a bad-tempered, violent, and unreasonable husband. Though I can never excuse an adult standing by and allowing a child to be abused, I am glad to see that she's willing to make changes and is planning what will be best for the boys now. The only concern is that Harry seems to be very quick to trust Dudley and Petunia and to let bygones be bygones...but I suppose it is also true that he has longed for love and acceptance for so long, that he is just happy to finally have some. Great beginning! Author's Response: I thought that since they are ten years old at the time, rapid changes in perspective are more likely - kids are still developing their personalities, and can chance their outlooks more easily. The mindset of abused spouses is difficult to understand, and some of the few times they revolt and run is to save a child. Petunia is leaving it a bit late, but unfortunately for her thats the way my story is going. Harry may be quick to forgive in the story, but again he's only ten, and eager for approval and love.
Author's Response: Thank You! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've always like P&S, so I wanted to post this story here as well. |
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