Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 02 May 2013 5:38 am
Reviewer: squeegybug (Signed) [Report This]
    I had to make an escape plan with my mom in high school so this is sadly familiar.

    Author's Response:

    I had to help a friend ''think of a way out" at one time, luckily he got tossed in jail and she had plenty of time to get away.

Title: Chapter 1 22 Sep 2011 12:32 pm
Reviewer: KarelaTheRedHawk (Signed) [Report This]
    I am interested in reading a story with a non-abusive Petunia and Dudley. I can't wait to hit 'next' and see how they handle Vernon.
Title: Chapter 1 11 Jun 2010 10:07 pm
Reviewer: SnapesLily (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! sadness. its prettygood for a first chapter. i always picture Tunie as a good one and Vernon as the bad guy. Love it :)
Title: Chapter 1 05 Mar 2010 5:12 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    I keep seeing this story updated, but you, I have so many on my plate right now, I keep putting off reading it. Well, now seems like a good time.

    I really LIKE it so far! I do think the two boys are acting a little old for their age, but other than that, it's enjoyable. I'm very eager to see how your portrayal of Snape will be. :D
Title: Chapter 1 31 Aug 2009 7:02 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    These kids are acting awfully grown up, from the kid who defends Harry on the playground and on to Dudley and Harry themselves - Harry calmly calling what happens to him 'abuse' and Dudley deciding that his own father will have to leave seem overly mature of them...

    -K
Title: Chapter 1 02 Jul 2009 12:42 am
Reviewer: sums96 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    so far i think this story has a good plot
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Title: Chapter 1 29 Jun 2009 9:58 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this looks very original! I really like how Dudley has realized how wrong it was for Harry to be mistreated, and is trying to make amends. It's rather like how his eyes were opened after the dementor attack in canon, but because Harry wasn't around Dudley much afterwards we never really got to see the affects or how their relationship might have changed. This is even better because it's happened at a much younger age and we can see them become friends ( I hope ).

    Petunia is very believable as a wife afraid of a bad-tempered, violent, and unreasonable husband. Though I can never excuse an adult standing by and allowing a child to be abused, I am glad to see that she's willing to make changes and is planning what will be best for the boys now.

    The only concern is that Harry seems to be very quick to trust Dudley and Petunia and to let bygones be bygones...but I suppose it is also true that he has longed for love and acceptance for so long, that he is just happy to finally have some.

    Great beginning!

    Author's Response:

    I thought that since they are ten years old at the time, rapid changes in perspective are more likely -  kids are still developing their personalities, and can chance their outlooks more easily.

    The mindset of abused spouses is difficult to understand, and some of the few times they revolt and run is to save a child. Petunia is leaving it a bit late, but unfortunately for her thats the way my story is going.

    Harry may be quick to forgive in the story, but again he's only ten, and eager for approval and love.

Title: Chapter 1 29 Jun 2009 12:55 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I read this over at ffnet. and already left some reviews I believe, but I just want to let you know that I like the originality of the story, and I'm glad that you've posted here too!

    Author's Response: Thank You! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've always like P&S, so I wanted to post this story here as well.

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