I'm glad to see Petunia and Dudley standing strong; not allowing jealousy or selfishness to rear it's ugly head. One would think that it would have to be up to the child whether they wished to have their magic or not and not have their parent's decide to bind their magic, but I suppose Dumbledore is allowed to do anything. On to reading the next chapter ;) ->
Still enjoying this, but I still think the boys are acting about 5 years ahead of their age. It's a little distracting when reading, so hopefully that gets better.
I hate Vernon. But it's so refreshing to see a more caring Petunia though. Good job!
Title: Chapter 2
| 26 Jan 2010 10:57 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Just started reading this, love it especially the Dumbledore bashing I can't stand the man!
Title: Chapter 2
| 02 Jul 2009 12:49 am
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Reviewer: sums96 (Anonymous)
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i like this story alot =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D =] =D
I'm happy to see Petunia and Dudley sticking up for Harry and making sure that things stay differently, even if Vernon is all in a tizzy.
And it'll be interesting to have Harry and Dudley be the experts on 'Hogwarts, a History'!
Author's Response: Thanks!, and BTW - I love your story Slave Child, its a must read for me.
I'm so glad that they are getting the beep beep out of there.
Nice work!
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