I'm really enjoying your evolution of Tom's character and the part written from Voldemort's pov was really interesting; you portrayed his mindset vividly and believably
Bad bad Vold. Cannot wait for him to be dead! Forever! THis is a really interesting story. Thanks for sharing, Mila
Title: Dorm Doings
| 15 May 2010 6:42 am
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Reviewer: Micheela (Anonymous)
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The irony is performing double perhaps triple duty this time. Neville - the most Gryffindor of Gryffindors in canon has become manipulative, coniving, and strategic - a true Slytherin. Voldermort (Tom Riddle), who most assumed to be the embodiment of Slytherin, is now housed upon Lions, and Shade Voldermort thinks he has a son, who is in Gryffindor. I love IT!! I can't wait to see what happens next and how Dumbledore, the master manipulator responds to this strange new world that he is not controlling.
Title: Dorm Doings
| 14 May 2010 11:17 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely going between the children settling in thank you
Wonderful as always - it was so funny reading that even Voldemort himself bought the coverstory concerning Tom's lineage. I almost chocked on my coffee... that one little scene caught me off guard. I can't believe I totally forgot about Quirrell being Voldie's host. *shakes head* Well... I can't wait for classes to begin! Greetings, Baltaine
LOL! Lord Mousefarts! And young Tom in Gryffindor with old Voldewart looking on!
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