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Title: Helga was in charge? 04 Feb 2014 11:56 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Dora and Tom please keep them together!

    Author's Response: I have gotten really fond of Tom as well.
Title: Helga was in charge? 02 Aug 2010 8:36 pm
Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it. Every single word :D
    Dora and Tom are so cute^^
    And I love the part about the Founders :)

    Greetings, Baltaine
Title: Helga was in charge? 02 Aug 2010 5:19 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another lovely chapter! I really enjoyed reading it.

    I hope you won't mind that I made a list of the typos that need to be fixed. They're the only thing marring this excellent chapter!

    I put the correct spelling in parentheses:
    assitance (assistance), expiditing (expediting), acquiesed (acquiesced), infilitration (infiltration), privelage (privilege), apparantly (apparently), persue (pursue), they boys and girls (the boys and girls), arriveing (arriving), managable (manageable), spanish (Spanish), took off his hat – which (took off his hat – to which), extrodinary (extraordinary), sponsered (sponsored) (this typo happens three times), apparantly (apparently), decieving (deceiving)

    missing apostrophes:
    that houses qualities (that house’s qualities), their families origins (their families’ origins), jump on next years (jump on next year’s)

    If you want to delete this review once the typos are gone, I won't mind at all :-)
Title: Helga was in charge? 01 Aug 2010 9:44 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter; I loved the line about dragging the 'pouting' Lucius down the path of the light and I really enjoyed reading the history of the founders.

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