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Reviews For 3 Slytherin Marauders
Author's Response: I have gotten really fond of Tom as well.
Dora and Tom are so cute^^ And I love the part about the Founders :) Greetings, Baltaine
I hope you won't mind that I made a list of the typos that need to be fixed. They're the only thing marring this excellent chapter! I put the correct spelling in parentheses: assitance (assistance), expiditing (expediting), acquiesed (acquiesced), infilitration (infiltration), privelage (privilege), apparantly (apparently), persue (pursue), they boys and girls (the boys and girls), arriveing (arriving), managable (manageable), spanish (Spanish), took off his hat – which (took off his hat – to which), extrodinary (extraordinary), sponsered (sponsored) (this typo happens three times), apparantly (apparently), decieving (deceiving) missing apostrophes: that houses qualities (that house’s qualities), their families origins (their families’ origins), jump on next years (jump on next year’s) If you want to delete this review once the typos are gone, I won't mind at all :-)
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