Title: Trolls and Dogs
| 05 Feb 2014 12:17 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Again a great take on cannon thank you
Title: Trolls and Dogs
| 02 Aug 2010 6:02 pm
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! I loved Harry's rescue.
I noticed a few typos crept into the chapter: occured (occurred), the Goblin hoard (the Goblin horde), seige (siege), duration of that persons lifetime (duration of that person’s lifetime), briuse (bruise), Cerebus (Cerberus)
Very interesting chapter; I loved how you've echoed the canon.
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