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Reviews For 3 Slytherin Marauders
It was very amusing to read about the dragon who ate McNair and her 'stomach alinment.' I hope that Tom, Lucius, Snape and Harry can all find happiness this Christmas and enjoy the festival with their newfound friends and family. Awesome chapter!
See, I like evil!Dumbledore -- or at least dismissive!Dumbledore. This one's a bit wishy-washy. But then, I like vegemite, and my husband throws up. It goes without saying: Please don't stop here.
Author's Response: Yes, I like my more assertive Neville. Hazelette is a bit batty, but I like her.
Great going, Hazette. Nice touch that McNair, who wanted to kill magical animals got eaten by a dragon. It makes sense that the Marauders would also pick on the Dursleys as well as Snape. Tom would be a very good assistant, as well as Percy. Author's Response: Interesting to see you over here. I check here for good stories as well. Glad you liked the chapter.
Severus needs to work more on making harry his son and less his ward. Wards are temporary son's are forever.
I am curious if Neville and Harry meet in the Diagon Alley when (if) Severus takes Harry shopping. Maybe Algie attacks Neville and Neville in self-defence uses the good wand against him? I wonder if Augusta would be thrilled how much magic Nev has or if she would be angry for him attacking Algie... Aw, such a long review, sorry. Update soon, Mila Author's Response: I plan for alot of meetings on that shopping trip - wait and see.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Not sure whether to have a romance or not - it seems a bit of a stretch.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story, I posted that particular chapter at 2 AM and didn't realize that I hadn't noticed the slip up on Dragonsrests' name - Briarfrost is a name in my other story on fanfiction, and I had confused the two. (Thanks for pointing it out.)
Author's Response: I've always felt that Neville and his story were largely ignored until the last book and then suddenly he's a leader and go-to guy (how did he become that?) He was most on the periphery and then shoved to the front. I know the JKR had so many wonderful characters that she couldn't backstory or focus much on all of them, but Neaville came out of nowhere and we never really saw where he pulled all that courage and cunning from. |
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