Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 3 14 Sep 2009 1:38 am
Reviewer: shigeki11 (Signed) [Report This]
    hmmm...
    I like the general idea of this story.
    but it's still a bit choppy (as compared to the other two chapters)...hopefully this'll improve as I continue reading. As well, you should try to develop character (by creating longer descriptions and conversations). I think there's a lot of potential here.
    g'luck!
    ~shige
Title: Chapter 3 08 Jul 2009 1:13 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh oh! Ron had better watch his stop!

    This is really different, and I like that Hermione is Harry's sister. I always thought that their relationship was like brother and sister. Too cute.
Title: Chapter 3 07 Jul 2009 10:55 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Why wasn't Ron outraged at being put in Slytherin? His whole family were Gryffindors. He should have at least gotten a letter from home.

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