Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 30 Jun 2009 7:43 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this story!! Can't wait for more!!
Title: Chapter 1 30 Jun 2009 3:40 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a great start...I thought you would have a couple of chapters of them growing up as Snapes but I this way is good too!!

    I think they should be friends with Neville but not Ron xx

    Maybe Draco can be sorted into whatever house they are sorted into and becomes friends xx
Title: Chapter 1 30 Jun 2009 2:47 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow. This is an interesting twist on events. I can't wait to read more.

    So Hermione and Harry are growing up to be brother and sister.
    I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 1 29 Jun 2009 10:44 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    What's with Ollivander?
    With the number of wizards & witches he has to deal with, shouldn't he be a little more Neutral?
Title: Chapter 1 29 Jun 2009 9:27 pm
Reviewer: Ann on a mouse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please find a beta. There are numerous issues with this fic that make it difficult to read. Notably, you seem to have significant confusion over te use of "their" and "they're."

    The dramatically out-of-characterness of this fic is not my cup of tea, but it would be better if it were more readable.

    Author's Response: Do you know anyone that will beta this for me. I'm really trying hard not to make mistakes and I'm using a computer spell check but it seems that it's not catching them all. Thanks for the review and please e-mail me at witchhex29@yahoo.com
Title: Chapter 1 29 Jun 2009 9:15 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good story.but snape found hermione and he loves her other hand he wants lily alive but not say amything about harry.thats mean snape love hermione than harry
Title: Chapter 1 29 Jun 2009 8:39 pm
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    nice start. Now 'this' is the life Harry should have had--with a loving dad, his godfather and sister and Remus.

    Molly isn't a very nice woman is she--and I bet she'd raised Ron to hate the 'dark wizards' like Snape and little Snape. There goes the 'golden trio'.

    Olivander is really OOC and though we don't see that much of him in the books I still like the old, wise and kind Olivander protrayal.

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