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Reviews For A Different Life For Harry
I think they should be friends with Neville but not Ron xx Maybe Draco can be sorted into whatever house they are sorted into and becomes friends xx
So Hermione and Harry are growing up to be brother and sister. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
With the number of wizards & witches he has to deal with, shouldn't he be a little more Neutral?
The dramatically out-of-characterness of this fic is not my cup of tea, but it would be better if it were more readable. Author's Response: Do you know anyone that will beta this for me. I'm really trying hard not to make mistakes and I'm using a computer spell check but it seems that it's not catching them all. Thanks for the review and please e-mail me at witchhex29@yahoo.com
Molly isn't a very nice woman is she--and I bet she'd raised Ron to hate the 'dark wizards' like Snape and little Snape. There goes the 'golden trio'. Olivander is really OOC and though we don't see that much of him in the books I still like the old, wise and kind Olivander protrayal. |
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