Aw!!! A cliffie! C'mon, how could you?
Great chappie, but I want more soon...please?
I love your twist on Canon, very well done, and you've blended the two perfectly.
Oh, they're getting closer to figuring out who the dog is.
Very exciting .
Poor Buckbeak, poor Hagrid. I hope that they can save Buckbeak like they did in the book.
Glad that you've updated. I can't wait for the next chapter.
That was a neat Quidditch game and also I liked how Harry's patronus was a panther. I can't believe all those dumb passwords--ugh! Sir Cadogan needs to get a life! Really! And I can't wait till they catch that rat.
| Title: Chapter 13
| 12 Oct 2009 8:12 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Can't wait to see Sirius get Peter, and what Snape does to his snakes. Can't wait for next post.
i hope paddy gets that Rat!...great story
OHHHHHHH! Almost had that rat!!!! Poor Ron though. Great chapter!
Ooh, that was close! I can't wait till they catch Scabbers.
I loved when Harry sent his Patronus after the Slytherins. That was too perfect. Serves them right!
Nice work. I'm dying for the next chappie.
Wonderful story, I am so enjoying it. Even though Harry gets "weird vibs" from Lupin, I like your writing of him. Hopefully helping Harry, will be the start of a tentative friendship??? Can't wait for the next chapter!
The play and movie "The Bell, the Book and the Candle"
Author's Response: Very good! Cookies to you!
Great lesson with Lupin! And I like how Snape is looking out for his boys too. Oh and I forgot to mention last chapter I loved how Sev talked with Hermione. He really understands her best of all.
Author's Response: Yes, he does. Glad you liked the lesson!
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