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Reviews For Vows II: Duty
Title: Chapter 9 30 Aug 2009 5:05 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg, poor Narcissa. LOL! I can't believe that I actually feel sorry for Narcissa Malfoy.

    Aw, that was an amazing chappie. I can just picture that little baby--soft and cuddly, smelling like baby powder.

    I can't wait till Draco and Harry find out. I hope that since Narcissa left Malfoy, that Draco can have a mother now, and that she can be part of his life. That would be nice.

    I'm really anxious for the next chapter to see Draco's reaction to having a little sister.
Title: Chapter 8 05 Aug 2009 7:07 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, now what will happen when Harry receives two brooms? Severus won't be too happy.

    I liked how Remus explained to Severus about the map and Severus seems to be getting along better with him. Good for Draco for sticking up for Luna too. Maybe they'll be good friends also.

    Hey, I've updated 2 Hawks!
Title: Chapter 8 03 Aug 2009 7:04 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter!
Title: Chapter 8 03 Aug 2009 5:54 pm
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 8 01 Aug 2009 11:14 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    ooh, so Sirius doesn't know that Harry is Snape's son? Yikes, wait till he finds out! He's going to flip! LOL.

    Great chapter. Oh, I guess Harry doesn't get up to as much mischief as in Canon, since Snape is in possession of the Map, not Harry?

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 7 28 Jul 2009 10:55 pm
Reviewer: MissDarkMark (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved vows and now i love this cant wait for the next chapter, will it be coming soon? keep up the good work :)
Title: Chapter 7 28 Jul 2009 3:23 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a great Quidditch match and I also liked when Sev and {Poppy watched over Harry in the Hospital wing. It was sweet to see Severus being so caring to his son.

    It's ony natural he would be suspicious of Remus given what went on during their schooldays.

    Now it looks like maybe Harry will get 2 brooms for Christmas, eh?

    Author's Response: Ah, yes, the dilemma I've written myself into of the two brooms... Still not entirely sure how I'm going to write myself out of that little box, although the ideas are coming.
Title: Chapter 6 28 Jul 2009 3:14 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Thought I had reviewed this one, sorry!

    I loved how Snape helped Harry go to sleep and his werewolf class was great, especially when he gave points to Gryffindor. But Harry really needs to learn when to keep his mouth shut when Sev assigns homework, otherwise he'll end up with tons more!

    I liked Crook and Padfoot's talk too, but doesn't Siri realize that he draws the dementors after him?
Title: Chapter 7 26 Jul 2009 6:27 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry!So Severus hates Remus in this as much as in Canon? I hope that things change.

    I hope Dog and Cat can change the way that things turn out.

    Great chapter, can't wait for the next one.
Title: Chapter 7 26 Jul 2009 4:38 am
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    lovced it. can not wai for the next chapter.

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