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Reviews For Vows II: Duty
Aw, that was an amazing chappie. I can just picture that little baby--soft and cuddly, smelling like baby powder. I can't wait till Draco and Harry find out. I hope that since Narcissa left Malfoy, that Draco can have a mother now, and that she can be part of his life. That would be nice. I'm really anxious for the next chapter to see Draco's reaction to having a little sister.
I liked how Remus explained to Severus about the map and Severus seems to be getting along better with him. Good for Draco for sticking up for Luna too. Maybe they'll be good friends also. Hey, I've updated 2 Hawks!
Great chapter. Oh, I guess Harry doesn't get up to as much mischief as in Canon, since Snape is in possession of the Map, not Harry? I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
It's ony natural he would be suspicious of Remus given what went on during their schooldays. Now it looks like maybe Harry will get 2 brooms for Christmas, eh? Author's Response: Ah, yes, the dilemma I've written myself into of the two brooms... Still not entirely sure how I'm going to write myself out of that little box, although the ideas are coming.
I loved how Snape helped Harry go to sleep and his werewolf class was great, especially when he gave points to Gryffindor. But Harry really needs to learn when to keep his mouth shut when Sev assigns homework, otherwise he'll end up with tons more! I liked Crook and Padfoot's talk too, but doesn't Siri realize that he draws the dementors after him?
I hope Dog and Cat can change the way that things turn out. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one.
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