Great chapter, I liked how Severus and Remus worked together to comfort the children. And Crookshanks was great too.
Great chapter! I love the way you get Severus to display gentleness, yet it doesn't seem OOC.
I really like how you incorporated Canon to fit your story, and make it your own.
You described those Dementors so well, that "I" was feeling cold, and like the happiness has been sucked out of me. You are that good!!
Love this story.
Author's Response: Awww, shucks! Thanks, Pandora!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 06 Jul 2009 10:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous)
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wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.
I hope that Harry doesn't do anything stupid, like disobey Severus . . .or else.
So was the half-kneazle Crookshanks? And was he once a pet of Lily and James?
Hope you enjoy my latest updates as much as I did this one! Great job! Can't wait for the train ride.
Author's Response: Yes and yes. And I have really loved your ongoing stories - don't get much of a chance to respond, I barely have time to read and keep up! Have a happy fourth!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 02 Jul 2009 8:13 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, loved the line "but he's not stupid enough to go looking for trouble either", haha, who is draco talking about. Loved Vows, and love this new one.
i feel so sorry for harry.
Nice chapter, looking forward to more
Harry not go looking for trouble! Yeah right! LOL!
Ooh, Did I tell you that I'm glad that you've written a sequel! :)
Poor Harry and Draco, although the restrictions seem to bother Harry more. I very interested to see what direction the story is going to take.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 01 Jul 2009 5:07 am
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| Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous)
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wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.
Great start, Zara!
I liked how you portrayed Azkaban, it was just the right touch of gloominess and horror. I liked how Sirius joked with the Minister.
Now we get to see how Severus is going to explain THIS to Harry and Draco.
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