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Title: The End of a Long Journey (Part I) 14 Aug 2011 2:40 am
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is awesome. I'm so glad I finally got to reading one of your fics. I just wish it was complete so I don't have to wait for more chapters.

    Author's Response: Oh, I'm so honoured that you would think so, considering how wonderful you are and how much I respect you as an author! I'll try to update soon.
Title: The End of a Long Journey (Part I) 05 Aug 2011 4:13 am
Reviewer: Smiley (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Gah! You can't leave us there - that's just cruel!

    I was getting so swept up in the story and then I realised it was the end of the chapter.
    So I go to click on the 'next' button to go on reading this marvellous story, only to find that it doesn't exist.
    Instead I find some ominous text staring back at me, depicting the words 'To Be Continued'.

    Well I don't think it needs to be said that I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. ;o)

    Author's Response: Oh, I'm sorry. Computer just crashed, but I'll try to update as soon as I can get it fixed!
Title: The End of a Long Journey (Part I) 05 Aug 2011 12:13 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You have got to update as soon as possible! I take it that James and Lily have more than one vault at Gringotts because Harry has been getting money from the Potter vault for school for two years now. I hope that this isn't one of those stories where Lily and Severus were secretly married and his memories were taken because that would ruin this awesome story.

    Author's Response: Yeah, this is a "special" vault. No, Severus and Lily were not secretly married and there were no memories taken. That's all I'm saying.
Title: Slippery and Slimy little creature 04 Aug 2011 11:52 pm
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Definitely enjoyed this chapter! Why do you keep referring to Crookshanks as "she"? Crookshanks is a male.

    Author's Response: Oh, are you serious?  I really thought that Crookshanks was a girl. Ooops...have to fix that. Thanks for letting me know.
Title: Double Trouble 04 Aug 2011 10:53 pm
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    How did Harry or one of his friends order a Firewhiskey when they are under 17? Surely, you mean a Butterbeer.

    Author's Response: Yeah sure...that's Harry's story, and he's sticking to it! LOL
Title: Ghosts of the Past 04 Aug 2011 3:04 pm
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sirius is using Polyjuice Potion to look like Remus, isn't he?

    Author's Response: You'll have to keep reading to find out! LOL
Title: The End of a Long Journey (Part I) 03 Aug 2011 7:40 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    All right! That's just downright unfair and cruel to leave us hanging like that! *sigh* I will impatiently wait for more. *grin* Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Sorry. It seems like everyone is right peeved at me for leaving you all with a cliffie. Sorry about that. Not! LOL. Sorry, I'm evil I know.

     

    Okay, I promise that I'll update soon. 

Title: The End of a Long Journey (Part I) 03 Aug 2011 3:36 pm
Reviewer: Jaylen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fabulous, can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try to update soon.
Title: The End of a Long Journey (Part I) 03 Aug 2011 2:01 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so happy you're writing again, Pandora! I've missed your stories.

    A great chapter! It's so sad that Severus lost Lily and it hurts to see his pain. It is very mature of him to acknowledge his own fault in the matter.

    It's fun to see Harry and Sirius (and Remus) getting to know one another and I laughed at the pranks that Sirius and James used to play on each other. You write them perfectly!

    And I loved how Harry is feeling conflicted about Severus and Sirius, his feelings for them and vice versa. I like how he recognizes that though they have very different styles, that they do both care. And Severus is feeling jealous of Harry's relationship with Sirius? I'm thinking he's going to find it difficult to let Harry go.

    And now we find out about the mysterious box? I loved seeing Lily and James, but it seems that all may not be what it appears if Lily is still in love with Severus!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much. You have helped me alot with inspiring me to write, and I appreciate your support and encouragement.

    I think that it's important for Severus to accept responsibility for his actions. To do otherwise, would not be healthy for him or for those around him.

    Oh thanks. I really love writing Sirius. Snape is wonderful to write too, but sometimes he is just so intense and complicated a character that it's a little more stressful to write him. I love how lighthearted and gentle Sirius is, especially with Harry. You can just feel how much he loves him. He's not so dark and intense and it's just a lot of fun to write him, Remus and Harry talking about Harry's parents.

     

    I thinkt that both Harry and Severus have come a long way in their relationship, but they are not quite ready to admit that they care about each other.

     

    LOL Everyone wants to know what's in the box! Go figure! I wonder why. LOL

     

    I think that Lily does love James very much, but in a different way. 

     

    Thanks for  

Title: The End of a Long Journey (Part I) 03 Aug 2011 10:50 am
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome story! I can't wait until you update!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try to update soon.

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