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Title: Double Trouble 23 Apr 2010 7:10 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter!!! Nice build up with Remus and Remus, and with Harry and Snape.

    Author's Response: Thanks Jan. I'm so so anxious for another chapter of Muggleville. As I told another author, there are only a handful of de-aged Harry stories that I really like, and yours is defnitely at the top of my favourites list!
Title: Double Trouble 22 Apr 2010 9:43 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It was rather unfair of Severus to deny Harry the right to go to Hogsmead with his friends. Harry didn't feel protected by this decision, no instead he felt punished. I know and understand that safety is an issue, but children need to have fun and spend time with their friends away from school. It was inevitable that Harry would slip out to join his friends.

    Author's Response:

    LOL! When has Snape ever been labeled as "fair"!!!

     

    Snape is starting to care a bit more about Harry, but this is still Snape we're talking about. He's not a fluffy kind of guy, and no matter how much his feelings towards Harry change, he'll never be a "nice guy". That's just not who Snape IS. And I intend on keeping him nasty to a certain degree. He won't be terribly cuddly in this story. I like a mean Snape!  But, he will make strides to be more fair in the future (to a certain degree).

     

     

    Thaks for reviewing.  Besides, Harry was denied going to Hogsmeade in Canon as well, by Dumbledore, and by McGonagall, for his own safety. After all, they all thought that Sirius Black was a traitor and a murderer. Harry's safety is more important than his happiness. Snape is worried about Harry's safety. (At least deep down)

     

     

Title: Ghosts of the Past 02 Mar 2010 6:52 pm
Reviewer: Kitsune-chan (Signed) [Report This]
    Please update soon!

    Author's Response: I will. I'm sorry. I've fallen behind a little with RL keeping me busy.
Title: Ghosts of the Past 14 Feb 2010 1:51 pm
Reviewer: Sommersprossen (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! Ha, I love backbone!Remus and Snape's reaction to it. :) I hope Scabber's getting "caught" now. :D

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I had so much fun writing that little "scene".

     

    Yeah, Scabbers needs to get his little tail zapped! :)

Title: Ghosts of the Past 12 Feb 2010 8:02 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Remus knows about Scabbers! I can't wait to see what he does with the knowledge...it must be eating him alive to know that Scabbers is in the dormitory with Harry...and that he has access to Harry lots of other times, too, what with Ron and Harry being close friends. I wonder if he's already found some way to put protection spells, or monitoring charms on Harry?

    Remus was acting pretty strangely here, wasn't he? He usually is able to be much more civil and mild-mannered around Severus...

    I absolutely loved the way Harry and Severus' relationship is developing. That Severus is so concerned, that he sat with Harry during the night, and that Harry knows it, too, and that he was actually angry with Draco and his pals/goons. He really has become quite protective of Harry, which is wonderful to see.

    And I especially liked how he was reflecting on if he had had a son...and then here's Harry needing a dad. Pretty convenient, wouldn't you say? Lol!

    It is such a wonderful chapter, Pandora! I can't wait for the next, and I hope we find out more about that box soon!

    Author's Response:

    Well actually "Remus" doesn't know that "Sirius" is innocent, now does he? LOL! But things are definitely not as they seem.  But anyone, knowing that Scabbers is Peter, would be worried for Harry's safety, considering the access that the rat has to Harry and the other students. Not a safe scenario at all.  But "Remus" is very worried about Harry, for many reasons, and is defintely keeping an eye on him.

     

    Remus, was acting strangely, but to be fair, Severus was not actually very nice to him, from the get-go, but yes, normally Remus would brush off Snape's rudeness, but it is unusual for him to  stand up for himself.

     

    Hee hee, I think that Severus is getting "Harrified"!  How can anyone NOT resist his charm!!  Snape was VERY angry Malfoy, not only for his treatment of Harry, but for calling Hermione a "Mudblood". After all, he lost the love of  his life, with such a horrible word; he vowed to never let those words utter from lips ever again, nor to allow any of his Slytherins either. He is quite protective of Harry though, although he'd never admit it!

     

    Hee hee, yes, Severus and Harry are secretly wishing and needing the same thing--someone to care about them.  Yes...very convenient.

     

    Thanks Kristeh, and I'm VERY VERY anxious to read YOUR chappie too.

Title: Ghosts of the Past 11 Feb 2010 8:37 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Do I detect polyjuice? Is Sirius pretending to be Lupin? Now that is novel! Thank you can't wait to read more

    Author's Response:

    There is definitely more than meets the eye here!! But you'll (hopefully) keep on reading to find out!!

     

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Ghosts of the Past 11 Feb 2010 3:50 pm
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting

    Author's Response: Thanks,
Title: Ghosts of the Past 11 Feb 2010 1:34 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Why do I get the feeling that Remus, isn't Remus? Or am I just crazy? All I know is that there is something very off about him and it has something to do with the escape of Sirius Black...

    I have always wondered why Dumbledore didn't fight harder to stop Fudge from stationing the Dementors at Hogwarts. Anyone with half a brain would be able to figure out that having such dangerous creatures around would be detrimental to the students.

    Severus might as well give up on fighting his sudden feelings when it comes to Harry. Once such feelings are there it is impossible to ignore them. I hope that he will be able to accept them in time. I find it curious that he was thinking about how it might be to have a son and it brings me to hope that he will take Harry under his wing. I have a feeling that whatever he will discover at the opening of the vault will further bring him to that point.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    LOL! My lips are sealed! :) 

     I know! I agree totally. I always thought that in Canon, Dumbledore should have fought harder to protect Harry and the other students from those horrible Dementors.

     Severus SHOULD stop fighting his feelings, but then...this IS Severus Snape we're talking about. He's very stubborn, and he won't give in easily, but then again, Harry has a way of charming the pants off everyone. Oooooh...why did I put that vision of Snape in my mind. LOL

     

     Severus is having some strange thoughts lately, and Harry has been at the center of them alot.  

     

    Thanks for reviewing.

Title: Ghosts of the Past 11 Feb 2010 12:15 am
Reviewer: hypercell (Signed) [Report This]
    what is up with Remus? What did he take? Is that why he is acting so odd? Will you update faster please? Love the story!

    Author's Response:

    Hmm...you'll find out soon. I know I'm a little slow lately with the updates. I promise to be faster, but I've been sick almost steadily, since New Years!

     

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Something's Rotten in Denmark 10 Feb 2010 5:28 am
Reviewer: Phoenix Phyre (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, Dawn. I wish you had let me know you had updated - I would have read this sooner! It seems you are mixing movie-verse and book-verse with the boys sitting in their dorm. Am I right?

    Author's Response:

    Hey Kyle!!! Congratulations! You're the 100th reviewer! You get a prize.

     A chocolate frog maybe? Yeah, I'm mixing both together.


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