Dolores is in for it now.....
Hmhm, I cannot say I am gonna enjoy this. Muahahahahaah.
I like the way you write, its a bit rushed, but its okay, I like it.
| Title: A Gryffindor Feeling
| 19 Oct 2017 4:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an interesting start to the story
It was a great story can't wait for you to finish it
| Title: A Gryffindor Feeling
| 17 Jul 2014 1:07 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good I love the roaring sound you give as a warning
Cool beans! ^_^ Like Snape getting all defensive for Harry, wonder what he'll do to the toad?
Very nice Cici! I am so impressed. Very well written, and no need to worry about not having a Beta, the spelling and grammar are good.
I am so glad that Dolores is going to get some punishment from Snape. At least I hope that Snape is going to do what I think that he is going to do!!
I liked the opening. It was a nice way for Snape to get involved and seemed like the type of conversation he and Minerva would have. Umbridge is in for it now. I wouldn't want a furious Snape after me.
OOh, good for Snape!!!
Hope he flattens the toad for what she did to Harry. Good story!! I love when Snape protects Harry!
Hahahaha Umbridge is going to get what she deserves! Very good!
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