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Reviews For A Gryffindor Feeling
This was really good, both in mechanics and actual storyline. Much better than plenty of fics I've read that DID have spellcheck available! Funny, when Snape first heard the distant roar, I thought it was that stupid lion hat of Luna's. You ended it in just the right place, leaving everyone guessing what would happen next if it wasn't a oneshot. Great job! Author's Response: Did we really?! I'll have to go read yours then!
Thank you! I'm not a native speaker of English, so I usually misspell loads of things and rely on Word to fix them for me.
You did very well without a beta. I really like how you had Severus feeling emotions that he couldn't identify. I hope that he pulverized the toad for what she did to Harry. Author's Response: Thank you! :D
I wrote what he did to he first, but I decided it was better if the readers got to decide that for themselves. |
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