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Title: A Gryffindor Feeling 04 Jul 2009 7:12 pm
Reviewer: Graciella Bellanotte-Diadoro (Signed) [Report This]
    Now that was just bizarre. We both responded to the same challenge on the same day . . . after it's been sitting here with no takers for who even knows how long. I feel like I should try to get some mathematical meaning out of it and play the lottery. But I'm too lazy. :o)

    This was really good, both in mechanics and actual storyline. Much better than plenty of fics I've read that DID have spellcheck available! Funny, when Snape first heard the distant roar, I thought it was that stupid lion hat of Luna's. You ended it in just the right place, leaving everyone guessing what would happen next if it wasn't a oneshot. Great job!

    Author's Response:

    Did we really?!
    Hahaaa, I was just browsing through the challenges so that I wouldnt have to start packing. hahaaa :P

    I'll have to go read yours then!

     

    Thank you! I'm not a native speaker of English, so I usually misspell loads of things and rely on Word to fix them for me.


    LOL, Luna's hat. That would've been awesome. 

Title: A Gryffindor Feeling 04 Jul 2009 5:43 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh very nice.

    You did very well without a beta. I really like how you had Severus feeling emotions that he couldn't identify. I hope that he pulverized the toad for what she did to Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! :D

     

     I wrote what he did to he first, but I decided it was better if the readers got to decide that for themselves. 


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