Potions and Snitches
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Title: Acta Est Fabula 25 Jul 2010 3:33 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Really liked this chapter: the way in which you've portrayed the horcrux's effect is really interesting, as is the concept of the cupboard being a safe haven for Harry
Title: Acta Est Fabula 24 Jul 2009 6:10 am
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I’m proud of myself that I read this whole thing today! Granted it’s only thirteen chapters long and they’re relatively short…which I prefer to the ones where you keep scrolling and scrolling…

    And wow, I really, really, really love this!! It’s so different from every other fic I’ve read. I think it’s mostly because we don’t know what happened when Harry was with the Dark Lord for those two weeks, and have just recently found out! That uncertainty is uncanny, especially since even Dumbledore and Severus didn’t know what went on, granted, they’ve had their suspicions, ha ha! It’s just a little upsetting that Ole Dumbles didn’t confide in Sevvie that he was being taken seriously. Jerk. But to me, the Headmaster usually is!

    As to this little cliff you’ve left us with…hmm…I do hope that Lailie will be able to get out, or at least to where Sev is headed (as he doesn’t know how to get out of a person’s soul) and that it was Harry who sent him through the floor, to protect him from ‘Voldiemist’ as he would be pretty pissed that someone has intruded in on his little Horcrux Takeover Party. And it seems like the obvious thing for Harry to do, being the squishy-warm-hearted kid he is…but then again…it could have been Snake Face, sending Sev to a very nasty place, I’m sure. Hmm…a hint maybe?...or could you just please update soon!!!

    That’s the good (and certainly bad) thing about starting in on fics that are into the double-digits. But then reality hits and you have to wait for an update just like everyone else. It’s always a sad moment when I realize there’s no “Next” button at the bottom of the page…

    Anywho, there’s my input, my begging of a new chapter, and my congratulating of a great chapter! Oh, wait, I don’t think I’ve actually done that!

    The whole fic is amazing, the plot is steady but not boring in the least, everyone is in character with breathtaking accuracy (minus Horcrux-Harry, for obvious reasons, but even him too, as Anti-Horcrux-Harry is reacting how he should to Horcrux-Harry and vice versa), and the climax is upon us!! HOORAY!!

    So, please update soon and I’ll see you around next chapter!

    PK

    Author's Response:

    Wow! That was a terrific review! Thanks so much! Most people don't take the time and effort to say quite that much and I really appreciate it :)

     I was nervous about the fact that I didn't really explain what happened to Harry when he was with Voldemort; I thought it might bother most people but I wanted to keep it out of the story since it wasn't the main idea. AlthoughI wanted to keep the option open for a prequel. 

    I jump back and forth with Albus. I can't decide if he's just a huge manipulator or just an old man who knows things no one else does. He bugs me most of the time, but there are moments when I love him too.

    If you noticed, I had Lailie chanting when she reached the door. She was saying the spell to send them back so have no fear! Severus gets out as does Lailie. (Oh, and I love "Voldiemist"-such a great term!) So that's a hint for you, but the next chapter is up already :)

     Really, thank you very  much for the awesome input. I'm very glad you enjoyed what I've posted so far, and hope you continue to enjoy the upcoming chapters. Thank you soooo much!!

     

    ~~Estie~~

Title: Acta Est Fabula 23 Jul 2009 1:54 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    what a great time to be a klutz sev lol >_> Ahhh well he'd kill me if i said that to his face lol. T_T when he went through after falling is harry still with him i wonder...arrrgg i can't wait for more :) awesome chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Lol. Well we can't all run all gracefully away from Voldiemist, now can we? (credit goes to pkrosche for that term) 

    Thanks for reviewing! and there's another chapter waiting for you already!

     

Title: Acta Est Fabula 22 Jul 2009 11:08 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoa! Very creepy and very cool!

    Author's Response:

    Hope that's a good thing!

    Thanks for reviewing!!

Title: Acta Est Fabula 22 Jul 2009 5:08 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Argggh...A cliffie!

    Exciting chappie though, and I'm really anxiou for the next one.

    Author's Response:

    oops...I didn't realize that it ended like that. oh well! guess you're stuck till the next update :P

     

    Thanks for reviewing!!


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