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Reviews For Something Wicked This Way Comes
I really thought at first that Lailie would be a bad guy, but she hasn’t done anything bad…but her “I have to leave too to go do stuff” was a little fishy to me…perhaps I’m just looking for more angst! (But secretly hope I’m wrong! Especially since that’s a pretty big plot point and you yourself said you’re almost done with this fic. And it’s not like Voldie would be able to do anything about the potion anyway…and he wouldn’t just give in…) Ah, Dumbles, how we love you. I don’t remember what fic it was in, but there was one where he had laced the lemon drops with a calming draught, and I just crack up at that!! It certainly explains why he’s always trying to pass them out, and even why he indulges in them himself! I mean, come on, who wants to be constantly dolling out bad news to snarky Potions Professors and teenage kids!? Have a lemon drop!! :) And about that potion…I seriously hope there aren’t any ‘side affects’ to horcruxes, because that would suck majorly. I am fairly certain, though, that it’s just going to be Ole Slit-Nose attempting to prevent it’s take over… Or, you know, something like that. I’m seriously at a loss, but I do like Harry’s POV here, it does add a lot to the story, to show what’s going on in his head/soul place. But it is strange that Dumbledore decided to go retrieve Gaunt’s Ring at that particular point in time, and not very smart of him, as I’m sure he’s going to be too tempted by the idea of seeing his sister and perhaps even his parents to not put it on…and then there’ll be hell to pay once he meets up with that awesomely Snarky Potions God! Ha ha! Dumles’ll have wished he had liquor in his office because Sevvie won’t be too happy. (Suck on *that* lemon drop!) Wow, so I hope that you’ll be able to get something useful out of this, as you can see, I’m extremely giddy right now. But this chapter was amazingly brilliant, and I’m glad us reviewers can influence you to update faster! :) And I don’t think I told you this before, but I really enjoy your writing style too. There’s something about how you write in general that’s just more advanced than most of what’s up here, add that to the absence of grammar and spelling errors, and you make me one very happy reader! I’m seriously no guru of the English Language, but I can’t stand it when I pick out mistakes! None of that here! So, keep up the awesome work and I hope this inspires you to KEEP WRITING!!! Till next chapter!! Kristin P.S.--I think a prequel is a great idea! I’m quite curious to what really happened wile Harry was in the clutches of Snake Face, as well as how he got there in the first place (a mistake of the fickle Headmaster’s? (Come on, show us how much you (sometimes) hate him!!)). And to see what the Order was up to during that time, with Sev hanging around, not spying per say…OH!! When’s he going to be called by Old Vold? I hope soon…but it probably won’t be until after Harry’s better or dead, huh? Shucks! (Ha ha, Voldiemist :)…I surprise myself sometimes!) Author's Response: Another amazingly long review. Wow!!! I'm still trying to decide if it's a good thing or not that you don't know what to expect from me. I think I'll take it as a good thing, ya? Hmm...thinking Lailie's a bad guy... ;P Ha! I read that fic too! where the lemon drops were filled with calming draught. That was great :)I don't think anything can get worse than being a Horcrux. I mean, having someone elses soul inside you seems pretty horriblealready, especially this freaks... About Dumbie going to retrieve Gaunt's ring now, this next chapter or the next two might explain more. I can tell you now, but i'd rather you figure it out on your own. I can tell you though that there are some things that are going according to canon...hint hint. I love your reviews :) That's what we like to call 'detailed'! and how I love detailed! I'm really flattered you like my writing style. I can never tell if I actually sound sophisticated or just another wanna-be. There are so many of them that I aspire to and I hope someday, people see me on their level. As for the absence of grammar and spelling errors, you have my amazing betas to thank for that :) (not that I'm horrible) but they catch everything I don't.
Anyways, thank you so much for reviewing! I'm putting up another chapter right now, and definitely expecting to hear from you again ;) so get crackin'!!
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can't wait for next chapters ! Author's Response: You're welcome! It was my pleasure :)
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I hope that he warms up to Harry a bit eventually, but it's good that you're not doing it too fast. Can't wait to see Harry get some relief. Poor kid. He never gets a break, does he? Author's Response: My pleasure! What fun would it be for us Harry-torturers if he gets a break? nah, that would be boring :P I'm glad that Severus managed to stay in character, I'm really nervous about not giving him the credit he deserves.
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dumbledore has gone to search >_> oh boy... poor severus he really need a drink. "How anyone could eat something made of pure sugar, he’d never understand." I don't get it either my little sister loves lemon heads T_T way to much sugar i think. Author's Response: haha, I remember lemon heads from when i was in elementary school :) And I have to admit, i just bought myself a pez candy yesterday :P guess I don't have an aversion to pure sugar either...lol
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