Really liked this chapter: the way in which you've portrayed the horcrux's effect is really interesting, as is the concept of the cupboard being a safe haven for Harry
Ooooh great cliffhanger. I thought the flashback scene was very well done.
| Title: Curiouser and Curiouser
| 25 Jul 2010 3:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Great chapter: I sence an epithiny coming for Severus. I loved your portrayal of Harry's 'soul' state.
| Title: Something is Rotten in the State of Denmark
| 25 Jul 2010 3:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Very interesting developments; I really like the dynamic you've created between Severus and Lailie and the way you've portrayed Severus.
| Title: Down the Rabbit’s Hole
| 25 Jul 2010 3:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Very interesting chapter.
| Title: You’re Gonna Need a Bigger Boat
| 25 Jul 2010 2:56 pm
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Angsty chapter. I really like the premise of this; it seems logical that Voldemort would recognise a piece of his soul in Harry and attempt to use it this way.
| Title: O Coward Conscience, How Dost Thou Afflict Me!
| 25 Jul 2010 2:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Great chapter; I loved the interaction between all the characters.
| Title: Una Salus Victis Nullam Sperare Salutem
| 25 Jul 2010 2:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Great chapter; I loved the image of Severus defeating the Dark Lord with a frying pan- it made a nicely comic twist to an otherwise heartrending chapter.
| Title: But There's More In Me Than Thou Understand'st
| 25 Jul 2010 2:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Wow, angsty chapter. Harry hitting Remus was very out of character, so something must be seriously wrong. I like the way in which the real Harry flickers in. It sounds like he's fighting whatever it is.
| Title: Vir Sapit Qui Pauca Loquitur
| 25 Jul 2010 2:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Great chapter; I loved the Severus/Remus interaction
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