Potions and Snitches
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Title: The Diary and Joining Slytherin's Team 12 Sep 2009 9:39 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, isn't that going to be hard for Harry to play for Slytherin against Gryffindor.

    Nice chappie

    Author's Response: Add a certain house elf to the mix and it will be even harder...
Title: Back to Diagon Alley 12 Sep 2009 3:34 am
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    It's cool at Harry has the diary. I look forward to seeing out what happens in the classes with Sev and Hermione. Great update!

    Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted to do something that isn't done in fan fiction alot and give Harry the diary. It seems like just about every time the author decides for someone else besides Ginny, the diary always goes to Ron. I figured Harry will be a nice change of pace.
Title: Back to Diagon Alley 10 Sep 2009 1:17 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    "Are just as educational as toilet paper," Severus interrupted.

    Okay, so that has got to be the best line!!

    Hmmm....nice twist, Harry ending up with the diary!

    Good chappie, looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    I liked that line. It didn't take me long to come up with it. All I needed was to think of a realy bad insult and that should sound like Severus.

    Anyway, there's not many stories out there with Harry being the one with the diary (I only know of one) so I thought I'd do that.

    Anyways, glad you liked the chapter.

Title: This Can't Be Happening 03 Sep 2009 5:16 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting story. I hope you update soon!
Title: This Can't Be Happening 03 Sep 2009 3:12 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my! Can't wait to see more of Gilderoy!

    This should be good. I'm glad that the boys got off. Phew!

    Nice chappie

    Author's Response: I hate Lockhart. He's too much like my 11th grade chemestry teacher when it comes to knowledg of the subject he teaches... I think I'll have fun making Lockhart's life interesting. >:D
Title: This Can't Be Happening 03 Sep 2009 1:52 am
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    Lockhart can be so annoying, maybe this time Snape will have more luck getting rid of him. Great chapter, I'm glad that Madame Bones was able to clear things up. Thanks for updating!

    Author's Response: Well, with so few people applying for the job and the fact the letters went out saying to get Lockhart's books, there's not much Severus can do other than humilate the guy in front of the school.
Title: Trouble 27 Aug 2009 8:30 pm
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked how you pointed out how the Flint and Weasley family would know different kinds of spells. Biased but true. I can't wait for the second year. But shouldn't Harry and Henry get warnings, not be arrested? For underaged magic there isn't suppose to be trials and arrests. That's way Dumbledore didn't like in OotP. Not that you're not perfectly justified to do whatever you want. Just arresting them seems a little it over the top.

    Author's Response: Most of the people who work at the Ministry left their brains at home when they left for work in the morning. As for this situation, it wasn't just possible underage magic, but stealing going on.
Title: Trouble 27 Aug 2009 2:03 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh oh! Harry and Henry are in trouble. I wouldn't want to be in their shoes!

    It reminds me of that song from, what was it the third movie, fifth? Can't remember. You know..."Double double, uh, cant' remember the words, but something about trouble!!

    Author's Response:

    It was the third movie. That song is actually ripped from some Shakespearan Play. I don't remember which one. It was modified though.

    Anyways, I don't want to be Harry and Henry's shoes as well.

Title: More Answers and Bad News 13 Aug 2009 4:49 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I am enjoying this story very much, but I must admit that this chapter was very confusing.

    Author's Response: Well, technobable when done properly is supposed to be confusing. :P Anyways, like my notes at the end of the chapter said, you aren't the only one confused. Characters in the story are confused as well.
Title: A Not So Welcomed Guest 31 Jul 2009 4:41 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the 1st part of this story and am glad to see it continued, im a little confused about your A/N though...arent the boys at the end of 1st year? it seems very young to be discussing pairings with girls, the idea doesnt really fit in to the story at all. Other than that it was a fine chapter :)

    Author's Response:

    Sorry for taking so long to reply to your reviews. I've been busy with everything. Anyways, I brought up pairings because I got a rather rude review about pairings on FanFiction.net when I posted this story there. I will eventualy do pairings but it won't be until later on in the story (maybe around 4th year or something like that).

    Anyways, glad you liked the chapter.


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