Today was definitely interesting for Harry. Hope he and Ron can finally see eye-to-eye. I wonder what Karkaroff has to say to Severus?
Great story here, really hope you update!
| Title: Chapter 43: Restarts
| 18 Jan 2012 11:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Quynce (Signed)
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It was wonderful to get a new chapter for this story. I had to go back and read the whole thing again to put it in context-- and that was really fun. Would it be bad if I mentioned a minor editorial detail? The author writes often that the characters' minds "wonder" when she means that they "wander." "Wonder" is a verb that means "to speculate," as in "Harry wonders why the hat would resort him." Students' minds "wander" when they think about unrelated topics: "Harry found his mind wandering during the history lecture." I hope that my correction does not offend. I admire the author's work and dedication to this story.
| Title: Chapter 43: Restarts
| 09 Jan 2012 12:08 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating I loved the scene with Draco hiding from pansy under the table someone should draw picture of it!
And the plot thickens! I'm looking forward to more info about Karkaroff, and if he's really ready to break with the Deatheaters, or if he's looking to hoodwink Severus and Dumbledore...
I like the way you've fit the changes into canon, and I especially like how you wrote Harry's first meeting with Luna Lovegood. :) She'll be a good friend for him.
Hopefully Ron will come around, too, once he's actually stopped and thought about what Harry told him. I like how Neville has become part of Harry's new trio, too.
I'm wondering just what Draco's agenda is...
Please keep up the great work on this story. I'm always eager at the end of each chapter to see what happens next.
Well done!
This story's really good. I like the way you write! Good job.
Awesome chapter. Love it.
As a prelimenary (yes, my spelling sucks, I'm not an english major)review, I liked it. I need to go back and re-read the rest though, I'm afraid I only remember bits of the rest of the story, but I remember that it's worth re-reading.
Can't quite remember everything that's happened up to this point... maybe you could leave a summary at the beginning of next chapter? But I enjoyed the chapter, can't wait to see what happens next! :)
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