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Reviews For Where Once Was Light
Lily's letter to Harry was great. They can be so typical and cheesy, but the way you wrote it conveyed Lily's emotions and reasons so well. There's even a small "parental warning" in the "It's not a difficult spell, but it needs to be precise." Good job. Author's Response: Yup! ^^ You get a chapter!! But I'm glad you liked the letter. I thought Lily would give her side of things before everyone else decided to make one up. You'll find out about Lily and Sev's hook up in better detail down the line. But thanks so much for the review!!
Author's Response: Hmm...maybe a hug is in order... Thanks for another great review!! Ten points to you!! (I've been a little point crazy today *shrug*)
Author's Response: Thank you thank you!!
Author's Response: Aww! Thanks again! Glad you're enjoying it!
Author's Response: Why thank you!! And I believe you're a new reviewer for me, so TEN POINTS TO YOU!! :) '
I wonder if Harry will change his name. I hope that he only changes his last name thought, or goes by his middle name, and then he can still be called Harry, because at thirteen it might be a little confusing for him to change both names.. Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry about the name too much. As I said before, it's more of a formality really. Thanks for another review!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Lily's letter was beautiful though it is so very sad that she died believing hte love of her life was dead. I had to stop reading it and get a tissue before continuing. Please keep writing and sharing this tale. I applaud and say "Bravo!" Dancingkatz Author's Response: Aww! Thank you so much! I know I always say this, but it really does mean a lot to me that you all like this so much! Thanks again!! PS ten points to you! :) |
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