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Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 27 Jan 2014 3:49 pm
Reviewer: janina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i'm from Germany and we learnt to say the full name of tue town in english lessons:)
Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 03 May 2012 3:24 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    So there really is a Llanfair in Wales. It will be nice to hear about it in the story. It's neat that you chose a place you had actually been to as a location for the story.
Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 16 Nov 2009 4:53 am
Reviewer: om my gosh!!! (Anonymous) [Report This]
    DUDE NO WAY!!! I WENT THERE LAST SUMMER TOO!!! :) i completely agree with you. its amazing and i loved it!! haha i still cant pronounce it though...but i got the bus driver to say it on video so i have it! :) AWESOME!!!! :DD

    Author's Response: COOL!! Then you know I didn't just make it up!! That's really cool!! My coach driver told us what it was too, but I still can't really say it either. It's just TOO long!! lol But thanks for reviewing!! (small world, isn't it?) Glad you like the story!! :D
Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 20 Aug 2009 1:30 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Well at least they cared that Severus was found out...or maybe just their info is gone? XP off to next chapter! Loved teh flash back in the beginning btw.

    Author's Response: YAY! You're the first person that's liked that bit. Ten points to you!! And thanks for the review!!
Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 17 Aug 2009 5:42 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe...I'm not taking a stab at that word.

    I think Sirius is going to furious about his godson and I hope that Dumbledore lives with this guilt for a while before finding out where Sev and Harry are. He deserves it, the *&%^#*@.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Haha! Yes, he said &#%@* really, really loudly! Glad you liked it! Thanks!
Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 14 Aug 2009 11:07 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I like hugs so I'll review... even if you weren't hugging people... by the way, the jello was yummy. :) Wow what a chapter.... and sheesh what a name Llanfairpwllgwyngyllgogerychwyrndrobwllllantysiliogogogoch
    I seriously thought you made that up but since you been there, then I have to believe you. I can't wait until everybody knows that Harry is Severus's son. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: lol With a name like  Llanfairpwllgwyngyllgogerychwyrndrobwllllantysiliogogogoch you'd think it was made up! But I'm glad you liked it! Thanks again for the review, and I'm glad you like jello and hugs! ^^
Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 14 Aug 2009 10:08 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You have promise.

    Although you write well, it is a little confusing when you jump from one year to another. While I understand that this is fan fiction, and I rather enjoy the past history, I found that Petunia Dursley acted rather forgiving all too soon after discovering Severus within her house. Your conflict in the past is wonderful, especially between Severus and Vernon but I haven't noticed much tension between Harry and Severus.

    Please bear with me; this is not a flame and I am not trying to discourage your writing. You are truly doing a remarkable job and it's enjoyable; these are simply a few tips.

    Curiously, have you read Heir to Prince Manor by Snapegirl?

    Keep writing, my dear. It is the only way any of us can improve our skills.

    Respectfully yours,

    Lady Julie Snape.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I don't know if I've read Prince Manor, but I'll check it out. Maybe I have in the past. I know I've read Dark Angel, or it was something like that. And I see your points. I was kinda thinking  along the same lines, but I'll work on it. Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 14 Aug 2009 3:20 pm
Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Llan.... - that was good. Harry is definetely safer if headmaster doesn't know that he is alive.

    Author's Response: lol Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 14 Aug 2009 3:03 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    lol, what a name! "._."

    Author's Response: XD I liked it too! Thanks for the review!! *hugs*
Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News 14 Aug 2009 1:49 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Dumbledore never finds out and leaves Harry and Severus alone.

    Author's Response: Don't fret! I have a PLAN!! Yeah, that was weird. But thanks for the review! You get a hug!

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