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Reviews For Where Once Was Light
Author's Response: Five points to you! (yay Harrison!) And thanks for the great review! Yeah, you're going to see a bit more of the old Snape now, especially with the Slytherin. And fear not, I remembered Tug, I just needed a break to think on it a bit more.
Author's Response: Yes, poor Harry...you might be saying that a lot soon...Thanks for the review though!!
Author's Response: O_O Holy CRAP!!! No one's ever bribbed me with food before!!! That's awesome!!!! XD Yay! Thanks! Come here my sluggy litte friends *laughs evilly at food* (I think I really could be insane lol) So, Vulpixer, I'm glad you liked the chapter! I'm working on the next one, don't worry! ^-^ I love your enthusiams, so thanks so much for another review!
I think Harry's friends will still be there for him. And I think that Severus will find out pretty soon that he is a seer. Oh the horrors! Author's Response: Five points to you! lol the horrors indeed if he ever finds out! lol And Harry's friends...will have a hard time with this one. Thanks for the review!
movie is Sabrina with harrison ford i love him great movie Author's Response: Thanks! And I know, Harrison Ford in that was GREAT! Five points to you!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! :D
Author's Response: Another Draco fan, good to see! Thanks for the review!!
O.O Was your Snape in prison and tortured or something by Moody? Yikes! Would this cover the period in which he was considered dead and Lily's happiness died? Oh no...He spoke before he thought. The poor man. And Poor Harry! He is terrified of Slytherin without his father. So, here's a question: If Harry hadn't managed to skip the previous Feast(s) would he have been resorted earlier? Like Draco checking out the reaction of Snape as possibly being something else. I love Draco...Interesting! (HA! Moody scaring the wits out of everyone! *laughs* Oh! And he had the nerve to sit in Snape's chair!) Oh man, Draco and Harry as roommates! HAHA! Snape is blackmailing Draco! HAHA! Nice touch at the end there, changing the uniforms! What a slap to reality for Harry. Poor boy. Typo Alerts: "The Gryffindor flame was about to be distinguished by the Slytherin water!" I think you mean "extinguished" there instead of distinguished. "Harry found that he could not look to long at this man, but whether it was from disgust or pity, he did not know." Change "to" to "too." "Snape shouted, a vain in his neck looked as though it were going to explode." Change "vain" to "vein." "“Overreaching?” Snape let out a mirthless laugh. “Overreaching?..." Do you mean "overreacting" like Dumbledore says? "He also in those eyes Lily…" I think you are missing the word "saw" in there somewhere. "If only he had managed to skip the Fest again this year!" Fest should be "feast." "...Weasley in his year stood up and started yelling something that was drown out by all the other talking." Should be "drowned." "Patsy cried from Draco’s right." Is this Pansy Parkinson? Cause It's Pansy, not Patsy. If it's someone new, then whoo-hoo, but I was wondering. "Dumbledore hired an Auror to keep the Slytherin at bay while Professor Snape could flaunt his freedom and his betray in all of their faces?" Is it supposed to be "Slytherins," and "betrayal," there? "... he sent up spark that popped and imminently caught everyone’s attention..." Should be "immediately." "Snape stood up for them to the other professor,..." Should be "professors." "Patsy wailed again, and ..." Again, is this Pansy? "“Despite Dumbledore’s lack of really concern,” Snape’s lip pulled back in disgust, “you are going to have to stay here in the dorms with the other Slytherin.”" Change "really" to "real" and "Slytherin" to "Slytherins." "As the other Slytherin made their way in, they paused ..." Should be "Slytherins." ""Am am here to ensure that you will all perform..." SHould be "I am..." Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! And as for the re-sorting before... I might explain it later, but I don't think I can put it in the story...my thought was Harry had to realize that he was something OTHER than a James Potter clone, really. Harry wanted to be just like his dad, and when he found out that his dad WASN'T James, he's whole ideas crumbled. The Sorting Hat knew about Harry and Sev- I mean, after all, it can go inside your head and find everything out, like how you'r mind works and it's patern and all that- and wanted to put Harry where he REALLY belonged, but at Harry's request, did not. So, I might have to put my full reasonings in somewhere...maybe in an author's note or something... But glad you liked Draco...and the reaction of Moody. You'll find out about Snape's past later on. I promise. And the last line was a bit of a slap in the face. Thanks for another review Raven!!
How perfectly Slytherin to make each of the two boys responsible for the other. And then to take it a step further and make them responsible for anything that might happen to the other? Awesome indeed. I'll be very interested to see where Moody fits into all of this. You've really created an interesting year for yourself. LOL As for the reference, (World's Only Living Heart Donor) it's from a movie I own. In fact it's one of the few remakes I like better than the original. Sabrina, with Harrison Ford. Author's Response: Five points to you Cee!! That's one of my favorite movies with Harrison Ford. And I think it's better than the original too. ^-^ And I'm SO going to love writing this year. I love drama and fourth year had some of the most drama in it for me...and of course I'm going to put even MORE drama in. It should be interesting. Thanks for the review!!
Ooh, I love this. I can't wait to see the fireworks. This is so gooood! Want more!!! Please? Author's Response: ^-^ Thanks Pandora! And yes, you guessed it. There will be fireworks, that I can promise you. And CONGRATULATIONS on being review number 400!!! YAY!!!! |
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