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Reviews For Where Once Was Light
Great chapter! Author's Response: Thanks! And yeah, Albus is beginning to realize just exactly what he's done and the Consequences that go along with it. And yeah, Harry knows that Severus's is his father, but Dumbledore doesn't. But thanks so much for a nice review!
-P.G. Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked the drama! I was telling the others that both Sev and Sirius were out of control. Sev had the stress of coming back to school, hiding his relationship with Harry, and running from DE on his mind while Sirius's emotions were everywhere after just finding out that his godson was alive and well. Yeah, but Sev got pretty close, but was able to keep some control. You'll find out about Harry next chappie. Thanks for another great review!!
Author's Response: OMG! I totally love you! XD I REALLY do want a Sevvie doll and the most insults the cuter it'd be! lol And thanks for the chocolate. It is VERY much needed. And yeah, no worries, they brought the cat back, but there was LOTS of drama in the house after. But I guess it's all good. And no worries about last chappie, I'm just glad to know you're still reading! ^_^ And yeah, I'm not that big of Sirius fan...always thought he was a bit of an arse at times, so no, don't feel bad for wishing him some ill will...Dumbles either. And I get in violent moods A LOT! lol It's just so fun sometimes though, isn't it? Well, thanks for the Christmas gift, chocolate, and a wonderful reivew!
Author's Response: Yeah, the dramatic chappie had to be added. It's kinda important to the rest of the story...so... thanks for another great review!!
Great chappie. I really thought that Severus was going to tell Dumbledore everthing. I wish in one way that things could be out in the open. Oh, I was really scared too about Snape choking Sirius. That was worrisome. I wouldn't have wanted Snape to murder Sirius, especially in front of Harry. Great chappie Ivy. I'm dying for the next one. I want to know how Sirius and Snape are going to manage for Harry's sake! Author's Response: Yeah, some of my cousins thought it would be funny to steal one of our cats and my sister flipped out. LOTS of crying and drama for a few days...but they brought it back, so I guess all is well. And yeah, Sev almost started to tell. He gets so close, but then can't quite bring himself to trust Dumbledore with that truth, not after the last time. And both Severus and Sirius were under a lot of stress and began jumping down the other's throats for different reasons, but all becasue of the stress they were under. And yeah, Snape killing Sirius would not have been very good ESPECIALLY in front of Harry. That would've strained Harry and Sev's relationship to say the least. But this will all come back later, so keep it in mind. Thanks, for the well wishes, and thanks for another wonderful review! I'll read up on your story when I get the chance. I think I can tomorrow.... yeah, count on some time tomorrow! Thanks again!
Author's Response: Yeah, almost is about right. He's starting to realize just what an arse he's been this whole time. Thanks for the review!
I felt so bad for Harry. He got stuck in the middle between Sev and Sirius, and that's a horrible position to be in. I hope Sev and Sirius can learn to tolerate each other for Harry's sake or at least learn not to fight when Harry is present. I noticed you used the term animagi when referring to Sirius, and you should be using animagus as animagus is the singular form, animagi is the plural. It's following Latin second declension rules, and since that'll probably be like Greek to you lol, just remember it's one of those weird words like datum being singular and data being plural. Hang in there, Ivy. The semester is almost over, and then you have like a month off. :) I really enjoyed this chapter and am looking forward to more. Author's Response: Oops...guess I didn't really catch that. Sorry. But I'm glad you liked the rest of it. But yeah, Severus got really close a lot of the time, but never actually got it all out. Harry just wants the secrets to end, but of course that would be too easy, and Severus's is just too paranoid about everything to trust anyone anymore. But don't worry too much, they'll have their fluff moments. But yeah, Sev and Sirius really do need to learn to control their tempers. In here I was going for a little out of control since Severus got back into teaching, and having all of that stress on him, and Sirius just finding out that his godson's alive and all those emotions floating around and such...so yeah, it was crazy. But thanks so much for the review!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much. Glad you're enjoying it so far!
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