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Title: Chapter 32: In the Snake Hole 04 Nov 2009 3:08 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Briliant chapter can't wait for Ron and Hermiones reaction of Harry being put into Slytherin

    Author's Response: It's coming up next, I promise! Thanks for another awesome review S.S! Want some hot chocolate? :D
Title: Chapter 32: In the Snake Hole 04 Nov 2009 7:18 am
Reviewer: Talon3 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well done! Harry and Draco's interactions, 5totally beleivable. I know that Harry is hurt because of Severus and him changing houses and away from his friends but he will find out that he is still the same Harry no matter where he is. I think that Ron and Hermonie will see that as well and stand beside him.

    Now here is a question, I know in the books that Theodore Nott was good friends with Draco or Draco considered Theo an equal. I really don't remeber Theo becoming a DE/ I remeber him as the loner. Wouldn't he leave Harry alone since he wants to be left alone, or did I read that wrong?

    Author's Response:

    That's a good question. And truthfully, I had kinda forgotten about Nott, but Sev's not taking any chances with the other Slytherin students. I think you read right, but I'm taking a few minor liberties I think with his character. Severus knows he has some power and influence over Draco that he does not particularly have over the other students, so he doesn't trust any of the others. Being Draco's godfather, he believes that he has a better understanding of his godson and believes he can control Draco better than the others. Does that halfway explain your question? Do let me know next chapter if it doesn't.

    But thanks so much for the awesome review! As I mentioned in another review, I'm basing Draco and Harry's interaction off of how I feel when placed with people I don't like. If you can't be nice to someone, ignore them. That's what my daddy taught me! XD And I'm sure Narcissa would agree (somewhat) here. And Harry's in for a bit of a rough ride...well, they all are really, but hold on and things will come together better later on. Thanks again for the review!! Hot chocolate?? :D

Title: Chapter 32: In the Snake Hole 04 Nov 2009 6:50 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    WONDERFUL, as always. The ending was sooooooooooooooooooooo good! Poor Harry! And poor Severus too! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Aww! *blushes* Thanks so much B00kw0rm! (you're name's fun to type out! XD) I'm really glad you liked it! I'll try to hurry along the next chappie better. Thanks again for the review! Hot chocolate?
Title: Chapter 32: In the Snake Hole 04 Nov 2009 6:33 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Squeeee!!!

    Great chappie my dear. Poor Harry having to stay in Slytherin.

    I hope you will forgive me for the short review, but I've been sick since early today. It started at work , and I feel really horrible and actually have a fever. I never get fevers.

    Can't wait for the next chappie!!! Love this story.

    Author's Response:

    Aww! You poor thing! I hope you get better soon!! It's never fun getting sick, let alone a fever! Take care of yourself! Have some chicken soup instead of the hot chocolate then!

    But thanks so much for the review!! I'll update soon! But only if you take care of yourself, you hear? Get some sleep!! Hope you get better really soon!! Oh! And go to the doctor just in case. I don't want you to get swine flue or anything terrible!!

Title: Chapter 32: In the Snake Hole 04 Nov 2009 5:59 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I definitely don't need the hot chocolate as we're still in the 70s down here, so you can have mine. ;)

    Nice chapter, Ivy. I'm surprised Harry didn't wake up when Sev entered his dorm in the middle of the night, but he must've been super tired. I was also expecting Harry and Draco to kinda get along over their momentary hatred for Snape, but I guess the boys decided to ignore each other instead. I'm really interested in seeing how their relationship will develop, if it will.

    Poor Harry. He's in a new house with people that hate him and hiding behind glamours. Not to mention that he can't reveal his relationship with his father. It's not surprising he cracked a bit at the end. The boy is dealing with so much, and I hope Sev will find a way to be there for him.

    Author's Response:

    70 DEGREE WEATHER?!?!? Make some room Ella, I'm moving in with you!! lol Bless you for giving my the hot chocolate though. It was about 40 or so today, but Ivy doesn't like the cold all too much. We need heat, you know? lol

    No, but on with the review! Yeah, Harry's tired and Sev WAS a spy for so long. Snape just got good at being a creeper XD But the best way for Harry and Draco to get along at the moment was to ignore each other. Just because they were mad at the same person didn't mean that they were going to open up, even just a bit, to each other. I'm basing their interaction with how I feel when I'm put in with someone I don't like. But their relationship will grow, one way or another, but you'll just have to wait and see! :)

    And I thought it would be natural for Harry to have a bit of a break down. Personally, I think I would. After having everyone think you were death, put under a glamours, then getting your friends back, only to be resorted, put in a room with someone you hate, having to hide and hate your own father...I totally would have cracked. But the two are super, sneaky Slytherin, after all, they'll find a way to spend some time together. Thanks for another awesome review Ella!! :D

Title: Chapter 32: In the Snake Hole 04 Nov 2009 5:28 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I wish that they didn't have to hide the truth of Harry's paternity. I know it's got to be hard for them to hide their feelings for each other and play out the roles they have been forced into. At least, with him being in Slytherin, Harry will be able to spend time with his father without there being too many people looking askanced at it. I have a feeling that putting Harry and Draco into the same room will allow them to become friends in time. Once they get past their past association with each other they will find that they are very much alike in many ways. Hopefully, Draco will also come to understand that Severus does care about him. I think Narcissa understands and in time perhaps Draco will see what she does.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Well! Someone did some thinking! lol No, I'm really glad when people think about the chapters. And I'll tell you, it will be hard for Snape and Harry. I mean, Harry's more emotinal then Snape, of course, but Sev's getting in his share of feelings now that he has someone too. But Dumbles is a force to be delt with. Snape's not going to take any chances with him. Draco's just brooding right now, still too confused between what his father wants and expects and with what his mother seems to believe. Thanks so much for the awesome review silver! It means a lot! Have a mug of hot chocolate!!
Title: Chapter 31: Welcome to Slytherin 01 Nov 2009 12:16 pm
Reviewer: ashquill (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I LOVE this! Brilliant character portrayal in regards of Snape and Harry.Great plot so far as well. I like how you've added in Draco's feelings of betrayal as well. Oh, and the scene with the Hat was really original, in my opinion. not because it's the first Harry's-Resorted fic I've seen (far from it), but because of how you've written (slyly mocking Hat and all!).

    Author's Response: Wow! Thanks!! I'm so glad that you're enjoying this so far! It was a little slow at the beginning, but I wanted to set everything up for later. But I'm really glad you like the Sorting Hat in my fic. Why can't the Hat have some fun as well? But thanks so much for the review, and next chappie will be posted soon!
Title: Chapter 31: Welcome to Slytherin 28 Oct 2009 4:59 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    lol oh boy XD can't wait to see how it'll turn out with slytherin!

    Author's Response: XD Thanks! So glad you're enjoying it Fairner!
Title: Chapter 31: Welcome to Slytherin 27 Oct 2009 2:08 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. This chapter was... awesome. I loved the end when Snape changed Harry's robes from Gryffindor to Slytherin and then said " Welcome to Slytherin" That was awesome. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: Well thank you Dramagirl! I'm really happy that you liked it! I'm really having fun coming up with this story, and I hope you'll like the next chapter as well. The last line was a last minute thing, as I was getting into it like a movie or soap opera, and thought that would be somethig they'd say. Thanks again for the review!! XD
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 27 Oct 2009 1:41 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    OH WOW. WHAT A CLIFEE. Good job with that last rhyme.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the rhyme. I'm fond of poetry and thought I'd take a stab at it! ^-^

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