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Title: Chapter 7: Waking Up 30 Jul 2009 1:09 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! What a horrible life Severus has had. Strange that he would have that in common with Harry!

    Do you already have this story written because you are posting so fast. I'm really impressed with how well this is written too.

    Update soon please!

    Author's Response:

    Ummm...no I don't have the story written, I'm writing every day. I had the idea of the story lined out before and had actully started writing the first couple chapters or so when my brother accidently deleted all of my works. (I had had other stories already written too *sigh*) So this is a revise of my original with a few new things added in. (Snape being a Seer for instance) But I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it so far! And I should have another chapter up tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing!! :)

Title: Chapter 7: Waking Up 30 Jul 2009 12:01 am
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad you updated again. My hope is that Snape will get more of his memory of his time with Lily and maybe a little accepting of harry.

    Author's Response: No worries there! Thanks for the review!!
Title: Chapter 7: Waking Up 29 Jul 2009 10:18 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    Didn't Harry chuck that bottle cap away outside? Ooh, I hope that it not potentially bad, but I have a hunch it could be. Aww, poor Severus. That man does not deserve a stay in Azkaban. So not only did Dumbledore basically take everything good from his life, but he also let him go crazy in prison for six months? I will not lie, I never really liked good ol' Dumbledore, and something like your story makes him higher and higher on my "least favorite characters" list. Ugh! And to top it off, he feels useless? Oh, Severus, you are not useless! Oh, this tortured man, while a litte paranoid about things like being pushed down the stairs he can't get down...Reasonable considering what has recently happened to him, but I just want to run up those stairs and hug him (gently though, to not hurt the battered body). Love why he wears his hair long, to hide from the world. So sad. Are you going for something that he is in many ways still like a child, because it seems very apparent with something like the hair remark reminding me of the phrase, "out of sight, out mind." Aww... Ugh! Back to the stairs! No wonder why he hates stairs and fears being pushed down them! (You tie the timelines together so well!) Looking forward to more.

    I have a little constructive criticism. Nothing big, fear not. Just a few notes. Towards the beginning I think you may have meant to say, "Death Eater meetings" as opposed to "Death Eater meets." Also, Snape's long hyphenated title for Harry: "Boy-Who-By-Every-Right-Be-Dead-By-Now" I think you are missing a "should" in there. After he makes it across the room: "What, did Potter and Petunia not like the idea of him in the house? Well, probably now, but still!" Do you mean "not" instead of "now?" RIght before your time break: "...Severus stroked the bird unconsciously, enjoying the fell on it against..." Phrase should be "...enjoying the feel of it against..." Hope that helps somehow.

    This is your first story? Well, if so, huzzah to you! You are doing wonderfully so far! I just need to get myself in gear and get cracking on my own story...though I will never make as good time as you are. Slowest writer on the planet! *points to self*

    Author's Response:

    Hello and thanks for the review!! AND the criticism. No one reviews my chapters before I post them, so I try my best to, but I think since I know what I want to say, I end up skipping the obvious. Thanks for liking it so far! Everyone's been great about this. I was worried that no one would like it. :S But I've been wrong before. I'll try and watch out for my little mistakes better next time! My mind tends to wonder quickly from sentense to sentense, so I just let my fingers fly where they want. (Not always good sometime!) But I'm glad you like my little dramas. I'm a huge drama fan as I think it makes things more interesting. Thanks again, it means a lot!! ;)

    Oh, and fifty points to you for being the first one for having constructive criticism!!

Title: Chapter 6: What To Do 29 Jul 2009 8:21 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm. I can just see Snape's face if he was introduced to someone as 'Severus T. Evans'! lol.

    Author's Response: Teehee! Yeah, he'd flip! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 6: What To Do 29 Jul 2009 8:08 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it! Poor Petunia. I almost like her. Loved the part with Hedwig. Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: Welcome! And thank you for the lovely review!!
Title: Chapter 6: What To Do 29 Jul 2009 8:00 am
Reviewer: FireOtaku18 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the story and can't wait to see how you reveal that Harry is actually Snapes' son and how that fact has been hiddien this whole time.

    Author's Response: Aww! Thank you! Don't worry, it's coming really soon. Promise!!
Title: Chapter 6: What To Do 29 Jul 2009 6:50 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    This just gets more interesting with every chapter!

    Author's Response: I do try! lol
Title: Chapter 6: What To Do 29 Jul 2009 6:49 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    This just gets more interesting with every chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 6: What To Do 29 Jul 2009 6:18 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!!
Title: Chapter 6: What To Do 29 Jul 2009 3:44 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonder if Harry will tell Severus that he's a seer, can't wait to see his reaction. :3
    I really like Petunia's flashback, seems that she didn't hate Lily just the choice she made with James, I wonder how she felt when Lily went back with James.

    Author's Response: Hello and thanks for the review! Just stay tune and hopefully all your questions will be answered!

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