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Title: Floating Peacefulness 18 Aug 2009 4:58 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    This is an interesting start, but I am wondering what happened to Snape's spying position? I don't think you have made that clear yet, though it seems like something that should be explained right away.

    Anyhow, good job and I'll keep reading. :D

    Author's Response: I touched on it, but haven't gone into detail yet. Thanks for reminding me to include that soon. The details aren't that important to the storyline, but I'll be sure to address it. Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you enjoy the rest. 
Title: Floating Peacefulness 07 Aug 2009 7:34 am
Reviewer: SilverPhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good! I love it! Can't wait to read the rest.

    Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you're not peeking into the reviews before you read the rest or it'll ruin the surprise, but I'm totally guilty of that before I decide if I wish to read a story or not. Enjoy the rest. =) I'm sure you'll have more to say. 
Title: Floating Peacefulness 03 Aug 2009 9:41 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Artistry: The plot thickens satisfactorily.

    Technique:
    "Dudley watched on the tele" "telly"

    "You're off your rocker" American. Try "mad as a box of frogs" et al.

    James Potter's son in bed. "into bed" would be slightly better.

    Author's Response: Thanks, especially for the Americanisms. I try to catch the obvious ones, but as an American it's hard to spot. 
Title: Floating Peacefulness 30 Jul 2009 11:48 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting. More please.
Title: Floating Peacefulness 30 Jul 2009 10:47 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    wow dumbledore is being an arse, at least severus is gonna do something!
Title: Floating Peacefulness 30 Jul 2009 7:23 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, can't wait to see what Severus finds in those files!

    Aw, if my son's weren't allergic to cats, I'd say I want a Flurry!

    Please update soon, this story is proving to be quite exciting.

    Yeah, how does Flurry survive in Snape's quarters?

    Author's Response: Flurry is a special kitty, but we'll learn about that soon. =) If only my cat was that cute. I have a Roxie that's quite the troublemaker and everything must be done on her terms. 
Title: Floating Peacefulness 30 Jul 2009 6:47 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, awesome story and chapter! I really like the development and all of the characterizations. Your Snape is so curious and so in character. Very well done! I can't wait to see what is in that tome! It was very interesting to see Harry's reaction, and hear that it was the reaction of a Muggle. Hmmm.. I like the cat. Great name, Flurry! Good job with Dumbledore. Hope that you are able to update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks. I always imagined Snape to be curious. He's a very intellectual person after all, and if he wasn't curious he would've never invented all the spells and improved all the potions that he did. 
Title: Floating Peacefulness 30 Jul 2009 5:45 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm loving this so far!!!

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