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Reviews For Alea Iacta Est
Anyhow, good job and I'll keep reading. :D Author's Response: I touched on it, but haven't gone into detail yet. Thanks for reminding me to include that soon. The details aren't that important to the storyline, but I'll be sure to address it. Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you enjoy the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you're not peeking into the reviews before you read the rest or it'll ruin the surprise, but I'm totally guilty of that before I decide if I wish to read a story or not. Enjoy the rest. =) I'm sure you'll have more to say.
Technique: "Dudley watched on the tele" "telly" "You're off your rocker" American. Try "mad as a box of frogs" et al. James Potter's son in bed. "into bed" would be slightly better. Author's Response: Thanks, especially for the Americanisms. I try to catch the obvious ones, but as an American it's hard to spot.
Aw, if my son's weren't allergic to cats, I'd say I want a Flurry! Please update soon, this story is proving to be quite exciting. Yeah, how does Flurry survive in Snape's quarters? Author's Response: Flurry is a special kitty, but we'll learn about that soon. =) If only my cat was that cute. I have a Roxie that's quite the troublemaker and everything must be done on her terms.
Author's Response: Thanks. I always imagined Snape to be curious. He's a very intellectual person after all, and if he wasn't curious he would've never invented all the spells and improved all the potions that he did.
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