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Reviews For Alea Iacta Est
I also really liked the flash back to Snape and Lily as kids. I wish we got to see more of them in canon (the sweet times between them.) Anyhow, WOW this story is taking me on a ride today. So intense!!
Author's Response: Harry was raised in the Muggle world, but for all purposes he wasn't really exposed to many things in the Muggle world considering the way he was treated by the Dursleys. He hardly ever went places, wasn't allowed to watch TV, etc. The only place he might have heard about cancer is health class in primary school, and cancer isn't something that's covered for children under 11 years old. I took a rather harsh take on Harry's upbringing, but considering this would happen in the late 80s/early 90s before all the cancer awareness groups were something that everyone had heard of, I believe it's very possible Harry wouldn't have heard of cancer.
Author's Response: It was a really hard one to write. I had to balance the facts with the emotions of everyone involved. Thanks!
Author's Response: *Hands over a box of Kleenex* Thanks! I really like hearing that it was realistic because that's one of my goals with this story. I hope you enjoy the rest.
Poor Harry...what a horrible blow to learn about his disease. I'm so glad that Severus has been able to see how mistaken he's been about Harry, and has become protective of him. Harry is really going to need someone who is devoted to him and who can be strong for him. Loved Minerva here too. She has a kind heart and really cares for Harry, and the other students, underneath her stern exterior. Author's Response: Thanks! It's hard to balance the emotional stuff with the facts, you know? And it's like how detailed to go, and yet keep it interesting without confusing people. Severus has his own storyline that's kinda in the background at the moment, but you'll start seeing more of it soon. He's becoming very protective of Harry, and I think he'll turn into a bit of a germ freak. ;) I'm glad you liked Minerva. In the books she isn't a very hands-on Head of House, but you know she cared for her students.
And rock on Snape! He's being very good! Taking care of Harry like he is and being so KIND to him. And snapping at Minerva and Poppy *snickers* yes, yes, you tell them Snape! But how scary it would be that everyone's acting so differently! I would be unnerved too! I always watch how people act around me, and if they ALL started to change, I think I'd be scared too! Oh! What are Ron and Hermione going to think? Hermione ought to know about cancer, but Ron won't. They'll go nuts! And how will they react when they know Snape's taking care of his? And poor Lily! She had a brother? How sad! That's a brilliant way to kinda explain kinda how Harry got cancer. Poor people! Ella, despite this being a depressing story for the most part, I must say it's really good from what I've read. I love drama, and this ought to be good. I'm off to read more! Oh, before I go, you get a cupcake! ^-^ Author's Response: Poor Harry indeed. He doesn't even know what treatment entails yet. I came up with the Voldemort comparison when I was revising the chapter, and I have to say I really like it. Sev's spy techniques are certainly coming in handy for him. They're helping him stay the rock that Harry needs right now, but even diamonds crack eventually... It's so scary and unnerving when everyone around you starts acting differently, especially when that person's a child. Kids are used to adults always being in control and when they're not, it affects them, too. I think there's a few chapters yet before you get to Ron and Hermione's reactions, so you'll see what happens when you get there. ;) Leukemia isn't genetic, but I put Lily's brother in there for another reason that we'll see later. I love drama, too and can't help torturing my characters. My fest fic is actually going to be happy which is like omg weird for me. I don't think I've written a pure happy story since, well I don't remember when. lol. A cupcake? Wow, Ivy, I don't think I need a cupcake after a cookie, but I'll pass it on to Harry for you. He certainly could use some calories. Oh, and Roxie, my cat, says hello. She's currently laying on my lap half-asleep and making it difficult for me to type. lol. Off to your next review.
I loved the Voldemort analogy. Very creative! Too bad it's so late. I'd like to keep reading, but one must sleep at some point. ;-) Awesome job! Author's Response: Yes, sleep is very important. I'm glad you're getting into it. I promise it's not just a plot device, there's a reason behind it. :P I just added another chapter, so there's one more waiting for you in the morning. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thank you. I couldn't have Sev retain his malice in this situation and being there with Harry during the bone marrow biopsy had to change him. |
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