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Title: Tactile Lines 23 Aug 2014 5:03 am
Reviewer: Jtz (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting bit with Sev's parents.
Title: Tactile Lines 29 Feb 2012 10:36 pm
Reviewer: NickyD (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the fact that Severus actually has a family! I like Aurora. I hope that we will see her (them maybe?) soon.
    Great chapter as always!
Title: Tactile Lines 28 Apr 2011 2:51 pm
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Severus' mother is named Eileen Prince and looks a lot like her son.

    Author's Response: Yes, I know in canon that Severus' mother is Eileen Prince. I took the liberty of changing canon a bit for my story. 
Title: Tactile Lines 19 Nov 2009 3:51 am
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Sev's mom! Good chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy to hear you liked Aurora. She's a fun character. 
Title: Tactile Lines 09 Nov 2009 10:15 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, Ella! I like Aurora, though I can imagine that she might not be as good with a small child. But it gives Severus an interesting background with this alternate family.

    I really liked the line about how he had saved Harry because he couldn't let Lily's last gift to world die.

    Poor Harry. Chemo is horrible; it sure seems like there should be a better way. I imagine Harry is shell-shocked, and terrified right now, the poor thing.

    Author's Response: Yay, I'm happy to hear you like Aurora. I messed with the parallel between Harry and Severus in canon already so I thought why not go all the way. ;) Plus, she'll bring some light into the story at times. I'm always excited when reviewers point out a line or moment that they particularly liked because I really like to know if you liked the same parts I do, so thanks! Yes, chemo is horrible. Unfortunately there's no magic potion that'll make everything alright. You're right about Harry being shell-shocked and terrified. He'll go through quite a bit emotionally in the next few chapters. Thanks!
Title: Tactile Lines 07 Oct 2009 6:31 pm
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus Hadrian Caius Prince? So...he's not really a Snape? He lived with Eileen and Tobias SNAPE, right? So did he just adopt the name? But seriously, Woodstock? *snickers* Poor Sev. Is he like he is BECAUSE he didn't want to be anything like his parents? That would make sense, right? But his parents sent him to live with his relatives too? How terrible! I'm sure they didn't know just how bad Sev would be treated...I hope. But they seem to be wanting to make amends. But honestly! Sev with hippy parents? That's hysterical! XD Very original! I like it!But I hope we can meet Sev's sister??? Maybe? *looks hopeful*

    But poor Harry. First he gets all excited and then it all crashes and burns for him after he's sent to his room. Poor kid! I would totally freak out too with all those treatments, and I'm not afraid of needles! Poor thing! I'd be sad if my hair fell out...even though I threatened to shave it all off once...don't ask why...But poor Harry!

    The last part I would sweet and ackward. Sev was being all like, "it's okay Harry, I'll be here for you through the bad. Here, let me give you a half-hug" and Harry was all like, "thanks professor, I needed that." But then Sev was like, "Yeah, but you might need to go in a corner with this cup if you wanna be a daddy some day." And I could totally see Harry's face go like, "WTF?!?!"

    Sorry about that. It's already been a long day for me and it's just gunna keep on getting longer. *groans* Wednesdays are so LONG!! But this really hit the spot in a weird kinda way. So thanks!

    I'll try to read more later, but it might be way later tonight. *rolls eyes* Some people just schedule me so full without thought of what I want to do later on. How rude of them! lol You can have another hug if you want for this chapter! :D

    Author's Response:

    Ivy, I'm happy you like Sev's hippy parents. I messed up the parallel that's in canon between Harry and Sev's storylines, so I decided to play a bit. ;) We'll see Sev's sister eventually. She won't play a big part at all, but I have an idea or two that include her in them. 

    I've threatened to shave my hair off, too, multiple times. I have super, super thick, curly hair and right now it's down to my waist. People love my hair and I hate it. lol. Pretty much humidity plus my hair equals tons of frizz. I always tell people they can have a patch of my hair from somewhere in the middle of my head and I'd bet you'd never know it was missing. lol. It's a big deal for teenagers to lose their hair. Even though Harry is a boy, he's still a self-conscious teenager.

    Harry is totally terrified and completely overwhelmed. He's taking on so much right now, and it's only a matter of time before he cracks.

    Things will start to get really angsty from here, Ivy. There's a few lighter chapters and moments, but you'll start to really feel for Harry, so keep those Kleenex handy.

    Yay, another hug! Thanks! I could use it going into working on the next chapter. I hate super busy days so I totally feel for you.  

Title: Tactile Lines 25 Aug 2009 11:07 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape's mum is great! First it was a bit of shock, but then I could not stop grinning :•} Very refreshing. Mila

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like her. ;)
Title: Tactile Lines 25 Aug 2009 11:06 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape's mum is great! First it was a bit of shock, but then I could not stop grinning :•} Very refreshing. Mola
Title: Tactile Lines 19 Aug 2009 2:24 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    0.o Wow Snape's mom is cool in this one lol! and San Francisco awesome! lol I'm biased XP

    Poor Harry! >_< I learned some new things from the explanation Severus gave him, man it sounds a hundred times worse that I thought at first...

    Off to R&R next chapter....

    Author's Response:

    I'm guessing you're from San Francisco? It's going to be really tough for Harry, but he'll get through it.  

Title: Tactile Lines 18 Aug 2009 9:46 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    This was really great. Severus' mother threw me off in confusion for a moment, but I thought it was really creative to have him sent to live with his aunt and uncle. So interesting turn of events there!

    I like your handling of Harry and the Chemo explanation. It was overwhelming bits of information. But he is fortunate that Snape is there to want to help him. Severus will take good care of him, I'm sure.

    Nice work!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. I decided to change up Sev's background well one reason you'll see later, but I already messed up the parallel storyline Rowling had going with Harry and Sev, so I thought why not? Someone besides the Weasleys needed parents that are alive and not evil. 

    Harry is fortunate that Severus is there to help him because the chemo isn't going to be nice to Harry.  


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