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Title: Cracking 31 Aug 2009 3:47 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was very realistic, but I wished you showed Harry's reactions in this chapter.

    I think he'll be mildly angry at first, then grateful the procedure is already over.

    Author's Response: Harry's reactions should take up a chunk of a chapter. It doesn't quite fit in with the rest of the chapter, so you'll just have to wait a few days. ;) It's great to hear it was very realistic. Thanks!
Title: Cracking 31 Aug 2009 1:15 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I had to read this chapter extra carrefully; there is a lot of interesting details about the procedure. I think Harry will not feel betrayed. More likely he will he glad that one over is one less to go... But of course it is just my bet :-) we shall see in your next chapter, right? M.

    Author's Response: We'll see in the next chapter. I'm happy to hear you found the details interesting. Thanks!
Title: Cracking 31 Aug 2009 9:00 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    My gawd that was a lot of weight on my shoulders while reading about Harry's treatment my eyes were glued to the words! I finally took in a breath when Severus could take him home, but then Harry wakes up in a panic. *breathes*
    Okay *breathes in-and out* lol!

    I really do hope Harry won't be too mad with Sev :( I dunno but I would feel bad like Sev but at the same time there really isn't much you can do if a specialist tells you it's what's best but then again they could be wrong because they're only human...arg!!!

    Sorry for my babeling, again....
    Ah we're on the low number said :(
    Hopefully you'll loves us all the more since there are less of us to remember :) lol I'm kidding.
    Great job with this chapter I'm learning more and more every time. :3

    Author's Response:

    It was a lot of weight on my shoulders writing it! Not only did I have to work the emotional angle, I had to make sure I got the medical facts hopefully all the way right. *breathes* lol. ;) I'm glad to hear you were glued to your screen. That means I must've did something right. Get your breaths now because I don't think the next chapter will be any better...

    And if it's any indication, I did post the chapter here before I posted it at FF. Thanks!

Title: Cracking 31 Aug 2009 8:51 am
Reviewer: SnowStalker (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Excellent chapter, of course! I just wanted to be the first to post a review! Especially since FF beat us...*sighs* It's horrible...

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: :) You were the first review. 

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