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Title: We vs. You 09 Sep 2009 8:05 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, as usual. I'm glad Harry understood Snape's decision. Snape is being very patient and I love it.

    One thing though is that you continue to switch between calling the Specialist "Miss Adamson" and "Miss Lucy". It is very jarring to read. I would suggest that you stick to one name during narration, unless it is from a character's POV who calls her such.

    Anyhow, good job!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. Snape has no choice, but to be patient. He knows Harry's very sick and has to make allowances for that. 

    As for the Miss Lucky vs. Miss Adamson thing, that part is from Harry's POV although it wasn't as intimate POV compared to the last chapter. It might've gotten lost a little since there were many things to describe, but thanks for letting me know. I'll try to work on that.  

Title: We vs. You 09 Sep 2009 6:46 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ahhhh so sweet can't wait for more

    Author's Response: Thanks! I plan to spend much of the day tomorrow writing, so hopefully I'll get that the next chapter out sooner than this one. 
Title: We vs. You 09 Sep 2009 5:57 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    :-)

    Author's Response: ;) Thanks!
Title: We vs. You 09 Sep 2009 5:44 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Still intense, but not so stressful this time. I know, I know: ups and downs, right? Good chapter!

    Author's Response: Ups and downs is right. Harry's starting to get a taste of what his life will be like for a while. Thanks!
Title: We vs. You 09 Sep 2009 5:21 pm
Reviewer: Emzy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was such a great chapter! The whole story is excellent! I love how it can be so emotional and at others times silly and fun. It's so enjoyable to read =] Today's my first day of school and I was hoping that you'd update before I have to go to make my day good and I'm so excited that you did! Excellent chapter again! Keep it up- I can't wait for the next one!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy to hear that you like the light moments mixed in with the emotional stuff. It can't be depressing and emotional the whole time, or otherwise it would emotionally wear you guys out. 
Title: We vs. You 09 Sep 2009 1:15 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Harry took the info on the injection so well--He's probably "burnt out" on tantrums at the moment, isn't he?

    Precautions? List after list of do's and don'ts that will attempt to keep him as healthy as possible through this procedure. Food, cleanliness, meds, etc. Poor boy and Poor Sev. I'm glad he has Sev though, He'll need him.

    V.

    Author's Response: He is burnt out emotionally at the moment. As for the precautions, you're right to a point, but you only took into account the second part of the next chapter's title... Thanks!

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