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Title: Lingering Evidence 01 Mar 2012 7:07 pm
Reviewer: NickyD (Signed) [Report This]
    Hum.. Books are arranged alphabetically so Tolstoy, Tolkin maybe.. which would mean Lord of the Rings?
    Great chapter! If only Harry could have seen Minerva and Flurry...
Title: Lingering Evidence 23 Dec 2010 3:11 pm
Reviewer: periwinkle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good reading this, not doing any work because I keep going to read 1 chapter and end up still here a couple of hours later. The lord of the rings maybe.

    Author's Response: I hope you got your work done, and that I was able to give you some procrastination material. ;) Thanks!
Title: Lingering Evidence 02 Jan 2010 4:21 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter, Ella! Of course Harry would feel a little awkward and uncertain around Severus after his breakdown, but I'm glad that Severus is being so patient and understanding. Harry desperately needs someone to help him through this.

    I liked the description of Severus' library. It sounds like a perfect place to spend a peaceful afternoon. Perhaps Severus will agree to let Harry show it to Hermione some time too...she would think she'd died and gone to Heaven!

    Great idea of Severus' to have Minerva change to her cat-form to explain to Flurry.

    Wonderful job again!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I think if Harry didn't feel awkward and uncertain it would be unrealistic, especially considering he's a guy and not used to expressing any of his emotions besides anger. Harry and Sev really are alike in that way. 

    Sev's library would be an amazing room to have. I'd love to have a place like that to spend a peaceful afternoon. Hopefully, Harry will be well enough to get some use of it soon. I think once Severus gets used to Hermione, he'll agree to let Harry show her the library.

    Writing that cat scene was probably the scene I've had the most fun writing so far. I could totally picture little Flurry in my head being lectured.  

Title: Lingering Evidence 15 Oct 2009 1:35 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    boy's skeletal back- this discription just hit me. It was so strong and it broke my heart...which, again, means that it was very good! My complements!

    '"I assure you the walls are too thick for me to hear how you and your housemates plan my demise," Snape said, his lips curling up into the slightest smile.'-Best line! XD That was too funny! He even KNOWS how much the students don't like him. LOL That was great!

    Okay, so now I REALLY want Snape's library! It sounds so COOL! I'd totally live in there!...if it had internet access so I could read on my laptop too, of course XD But it really does sound like my perfect library.

    Minerva and Flurry was an amazing idea! Poor Flurry though. She knows Harry and she just wants to love him! Sev's gunna have to let her sleep with him more often now. I wish I knew exactly what McGonagall said to Flurry though...oh well. It was very cute!

    Well, Ella, this was amazing and I love it to bits! I'll have to read later on! Oh, I'm Slytherin, and was Harry looking at LOTR? I think Sev would be a Tolkien fan! XD

    Author's Response:

    Yay, Ivy. I totally agree with you about the library. Harry's too thin at the moment, and most of it isn't even from his cancer. After Sirius died, Harry was depressed and somewhat withdrawn, a perfect recipe for not being hungry. He's thin to begin with, and it doesn't take much for him to be too thin. 

    I'm happy to hear you loved that line. I like that one, too.

    The Minerva and Flurry scene was one of those that I had the idea for, for quite some time and couldn't wait to write. It was a lot of fun to write, and I can still totally picture little Flurry sitting there at attention. I'm sure whatever McGonagall said was very teacher like.

    Oh, and 5 points to Slytherin! ;) Thanks again, Ivy! 

Title: Lingering Evidence 22 Sep 2009 10:26 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I bet the book was Lord of the Rings. I appreciate that you've finally gotten someone to think about what kind of life Harry had at home. Severus is turning out to be quite an amazing person. I can't figure out how he can teach during the day and care for Harry in the coming school year. What about bringing germs in on student work?

    Author's Response:

    5 points to you! It was inevitable Severus would start to wonder about Harry's home life. You can't live with a person and not start to notice the little things, especially when the observer is Severus, a former spy. 

    As for the teaching thing, he'll only be teaching four classes, which means he'll have one or two classes a day to teach. He won't be teaching more than three hours a day at the very longest. I think it's important for Severus to still retain some teaching duties as it'll give him a much-needed break from caring for Harry. During that time, Poppy, Miss Adamson, or even Minerva if she has a free period will stay with Harry. The germs on the student work won't be a problem after passing through the sterilization charm Severus set on his chambers. 

Title: Lingering Evidence 19 Sep 2009 11:23 pm
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love your story I always thought that there is a human being under severus skin. I thnik given the right person and time they could of drawn him out.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I always believed Severus had a human-side to him. lol. He is after all human. ;) He's just been hurt in the past and anyone who's had that happen to them won't trust as easily and naturally withdraw from people. 
Title: Lingering Evidence 18 Sep 2009 10:26 pm
Reviewer: Autumnamberleaves (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey, thanks for the shout-out. I throughly enjoyed this chapter, as I have done so with the rest of them. I loved the scene with Minerva talking to the cat, cute and very funny. I also enjoyed the library scene, that place sounds like my sort of place of comfort/escape. It seemed really cozy. Who would have thought that something of SNAPE'S could be considered COZY. LOL, I guess that's one more reason to hide it's existance. hehe. Let's see, as I was reading the library scene and got to the part with the first book, I immediately thought of Tolkin's "Lord of the Rings." I don't know though, but it just seems likely due to the fact that it was next to the other "T" author and that it is a huge book. I'm Slythern. Also, I want to do the prompt fest, but not sure if I actually will. I shall see. Life's sort of...crazy at the moment. Please update soon, it'd be a perfect birthday if you did (mine's tomorrow, 9-19, hehe). :-D

    Author's Response:

    You're welcome and 5 points to Slytherin!

    I had so much fun writing the scene with Minerva and Flurry. I've had the idea for a while and couldn't wait to write it. I wanted Sev's library to kinda be the opposite of scary huge university libraries. They honestly scare me, and frustrate me every time I try to find a book in them. lol. I think the library will be a great study place for Harry as I can't see him being one to sit at the desk in his room to do his coursework.

    I don't think I'll get an update up tomorrow. I haven't started it yet, oops, and Saturdays are horrible days for me. Not only do I have to get up super early so I can get to class by 9:30 (I'm usually up til 4 am), but I usually have to work. Blah. Tomorrow I have to close, so at least when I get home I'll be able to take a nap for like two hours before going into work, but that almost makes it worse because it's like you have to get up twice in one day to do something, but if I don't take a nap I'll die by the time we close.

    I think I'm going to start on my challenge fic tonight, and try to get a feel for it. I plan to use first person which I haven't written in for a long time. We'll see how that goes. lol. 

    Happy early birthday! I hope you have a wonderful day tomorrow and eat lots of yummy cake.  

Title: Lingering Evidence 17 Sep 2009 9:25 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Tom Sawyer and Hucklebery Finn :)
    The chapter was nice! M.

    Author's Response: Nope, but a nice guess and thanks! That chapter was a lot of fun to write. 
Title: Lingering Evidence 17 Sep 2009 1:57 pm
Reviewer: Lionessmon (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter, well done! The large tome with odd characters looks and sounds like Tolkin's Lord of the Rings. If I am right then please give Slytherin some points. Post soon

    Author's Response: 5 points to Slytherin! Thanks!
Title: Lingering Evidence 17 Sep 2009 10:17 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Slytherin! lol erg gold lettering? A book of Classical Fairy tales? XD But then Sev said it was one of his favorites...something he Lily gave him to read maybe...I dunno lol!

    "He poked the Cupid's left eye with his finger."
    haha I wonder how he felt doing that :P

    Author's Response:

    LOL. You'll just have to wait and see which book it was...

    I'm glad you pointed that part out. It was symbolic since Cupid symbolizes love, and so Sev poking Cupid's eye kinda shows what he thinks of love. Thanks! 


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