You're right. I think Severus was expecting Harry's outburst, but expecting it and experiencing it is a different thing. I don't think he realized how hurt he'd be by it. Harry's outburst was essential. He's a teenager, which means he's prone to emotional outbursts just like any other teenager. Aww, yay, I'm glad to hear you liked the like "Frankly I can." The day I was writing the chapter they asked a question on Jeopardy about "Gone with the Wind" and the famous last line ("Frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn.") and I totally had that still in my head when I got to the end of this chapter. It just seemed right. It is interesting now that Harry has to realize and deal with someone really being in charge of him. He's never had that in his memory and at nearly sixteen, I'm sure he'll feel like he doesn't need it anymore, at least at times. 

Hmm, about Flurry. Perhaps if you talked to her, she could work a visit into her schedule for you. She is feeling rather ignored these days. ;)

Thanks so much! I was so surprised to see your review as I wasn't sure you were still reading my story.