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Reviews For Alea Iacta Est
Title: The Space Beyond the Bubble 13 Jul 2011 11:16 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Another excellent chapter. :-)
    The next one is obviously going to be super-angsty, but I look forward to it!
Title: The Space Beyond the Bubble 13 Jul 2011 8:41 pm
Reviewer: Vulpixer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Damn you Remus! You can't just pop back into his life and try to take him, then expect him to be grateful and fall all over himself accepting!! Gah!! Wait till Sev hears how you upset Harry, better hope his temper is in check.. Update soon! Love this story!
Title: The Space Beyond the Bubble 13 Jul 2011 3:40 pm
Reviewer: SpicyKittins (Signed) [Report This]
    I got all excited when I saw there was a new chapter! Brilliant as always! Can't wait for the next one!
Title: The Space Beyond the Bubble 13 Jul 2011 3:29 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    I always love getting the email alerts that you've updated. :-)

    Poor Harry is so stressed right now! That can't be good for him health-wise. And of course, with his friends waiting behind the next door, the stress is only going to mount.

    Hopefully Hermione has done her usual research and chastised... Um, I mean warned the others on what to do and not to do.

    I really wanted to reach through the monitor and slap Remus upside the head. I know he cares for Harry and is concerned over the trustworthiness of Severus but he really has an addlepated way of showing it, doesn't he?

    As always, I'm eagerly looking forward to the next update. Great job building the tension in this one.

    I especially enjoyed the image of Severus and his "overstuffed" bag of supplies. Much like a diaper bag (but don't tell Harry I said that). And of course the interactions between Snape and Minerva are always a treat.
Title: The Space Beyond the Bubble 13 Jul 2011 3:26 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! But I think if Remus doesn't get his act together I might prefer him as a wolf-skin rug!

    thanks for the update!
    V.
Title: Luck Is Always With You 13 Jul 2011 8:44 am
Reviewer: Suzaku (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome!!!

    I'm really loving it thus far!
Title: Luck Is Always With You 19 Jun 2011 4:17 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Liked it a lot, actually. Well-handled!
Title: Luck Is Always With You 16 Jun 2011 11:31 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you so much this is a wonderfull sensitive handling of a terrible issue. Having nursed 2 relatives through the last stages I thought it would be hard to read but your story does not over do the pain just the tragedy of a oung life felled by dreadful circumstances
Title: Luck Is Always With You 16 Jun 2011 7:47 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    FINALLY!

    Do you know how long I (many of us) have been waiting?!?!

    Of course you do. But school sucks. Right?

    I heart this chapter. I think I felt worse for Harry after he shaved his head, rather than before. Just the way he didn't want to look in the mirror and didn't want Snape to look at his head. It was a very solemn moment and you portrayed it very well.

    And I never even considered before what the sensation of having a bald head must feel like.

    The only technical thing I noticed was this, from Snape:

    "No, but there's hats in your wardrobe."

    That was dialogue, so I don't know if that was intentional or not. But hats being plural, shouldn't that be *there are* instead? Disregard if I'm wrong, but that caught my eye.

    I'm so glad you updated. Like, fo' real.

    :-)
Title: Luck Is Always With You 16 Jun 2011 11:38 am
Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW!!!!! I just started reading this today and it's absolutely amazing! update soon! :)

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