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Reviews For Alea Iacta Est
Title: 514 03 Aug 2009 11:35 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome. great development! Great chapter, Thanks for the update! Everyone seems very in character, I liked how curious Snape was, and his Muggle arithmetic. I hope that they will find some answers eventually, but I am looking forward to the puzzlement and trying to figure things out.

    Author's Response: The answers are coming soon, well the start of them anyway. I love stories where I have to figure things out, too so that's probably why I write like that. It's not as fun being told everything right away. 
Title: 514 03 Aug 2009 10:17 pm
Reviewer: Princess_Arica_of_Rivendell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please update again soon.
Title: Floating Peacefulness 03 Aug 2009 9:41 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Artistry: The plot thickens satisfactorily.

    Technique:
    "Dudley watched on the tele" "telly"

    "You're off your rocker" American. Try "mad as a box of frogs" et al.

    James Potter's son in bed. "into bed" would be slightly better.

    Author's Response: Thanks, especially for the Americanisms. I try to catch the obvious ones, but as an American it's hard to spot. 
Title: The Die is Cast 03 Aug 2009 9:29 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Artistry:
    I like the start, it holds the interest.

    Technique:
    "Potter's abhorrent decision to trapeze across Britain" I think you mean 'traipse' not 'trapeze'.

    "running for their mummy's" It's not a possessive, and should be 'mummies'

    It's just me: I hate the nickname 'Mione'

    Author's Response: Thanks again. And while I'm not too thrilled with Mione either, I can't see them after all these years not having a nickname for her. Don't worry, I probably won't use it too much. 
Title: 514 03 Aug 2009 10:04 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "If his curiosity hadn't been peaked"

    It's 'piqued', actually.

    Otherwise, a highly interesting story.

    Author's Response: Oops. Thanks for pointing out my mistake. I hate ones like that Word doesn't bring to my attention. 

    Author's Response: Oops. Thanks for pointing out my mistake. I hate ones like that Word doesn't bring to my attention. 

    Author's Response: Oops. Thanks for pointing out my mistake. I hate ones like that that Word doesn't bring to my attention. 
Title: 514 03 Aug 2009 7:39 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good story!!
Title: The Die is Cast 31 Jul 2009 6:28 pm
Reviewer: Sheila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting!! I like it - but: How do you quarter a sugar cube ??

    Author's Response: I'm not exactly sure. LOL. It goes to show that the last time I saw a sugar cube was like ten years ago. But Sev would have a way. Perhaps he invented a spell and it's in the Half-Blood Prince's book. It just seemed to me it would be a Snapeish thing to do. 
Title: Floating Peacefulness 30 Jul 2009 11:48 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting. More please.
Title: Floating Peacefulness 30 Jul 2009 10:47 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    wow dumbledore is being an arse, at least severus is gonna do something!
Title: Floating Peacefulness 30 Jul 2009 7:23 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, can't wait to see what Severus finds in those files!

    Aw, if my son's weren't allergic to cats, I'd say I want a Flurry!

    Please update soon, this story is proving to be quite exciting.

    Yeah, how does Flurry survive in Snape's quarters?

    Author's Response: Flurry is a special kitty, but we'll learn about that soon. =) If only my cat was that cute. I have a Roxie that's quite the troublemaker and everything must be done on her terms. 

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