I really like this story. Even though I have finals in two weeks and a ton of work to do to prepare for them I procrastinated all of that after I started this story. I think I finished this entire thing within ten hours, including breaks for homework and social time. I'm sad that there's not more.
I think you've accurately portrayed how Harry was feeling about his Godfather's death. I like the way you've kind of kept things the same as the books, but changed them just enough. I can totally see Snape having another secret life that not many people know of. I mean he WAS a spy for Dumbledore.
Which brings me to Dumbledore. He seems rather annoying to me in this story. I understand that he doesn't get what cancer is exactly, but he has several people telling him that it's bad, but he just doesn't seem to get it. I like that Mrs. Weasley and Snape are protecting Harry from Dumbledore.
Awesome story. Wonderful job at research. I cannot wait to see where you will go with this stroy, but it will be good. Thank you for allowing me on your journey.
I hope Severus blasts Vodly into miniscule dust particles and blows them away.
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| 03 Nov 2011 1:14 am
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Wonderful chapter thank you so much for updating
| Title: Indulging Misguided Notions
| 02 Nov 2011 11:56 pm
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Poor Hrry what should be a time for healing is worse than the chemo! harry's reaction is not surprising it is like him to want to suffer for something tht he feels is his fault! Your handling of it is very assured and wonderful thank you
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Great story so far. So descriptive.
This is an excellent ff. (On a different note I found this a while ago but my grandmother had just passed from cancer which made it tough to read for a while)
Anyways you write perfect or almost flawlessly. I can't wait for an update!
I love Pottermore too (WizardPixie61 here!)! Those papers sound awful.
Again a very well written story.
School must come first, but I'll be waiting to see what the next chapter brings at the end of your semester. :)
Harry, Harry, Harry! If only you'd tell your friends that being physically touched hurts, then they'd back off. But they can't read your mind, so you need to TELL them!
Yes, I'm a tad frustrated with Harry right now, but I also understand why he was behaving that way. Guilt is a hard thing to handle anyway, but when it's self-inflicted, it is even more difficult to snap out of.
Snape, as always was wonderfully in character, even as he showed his compassion for Harry. I like it that you show his frustration when things get really aggravating, whether with his own decision, Harry's actions, Moody's insistence that he's untrustworthy, or Dumbledore's continuing monofocus on Harry as the only solution to the Voldemort problem.
I liked the wand part of the ceremony. I wanted to smack Dumbledore though, for dumping the burden on Harry once again. :P If Dumbledore is the only wizard that Moldy-Voldy fears, then why the heck isn't Dumbledore facing off to him instead of leaving it all to Harry? I certainly don't think that the prophecy is something set in stone. I swear that by the time I got done with HPHBP, I wanted to revive the Headmaster and ream him out for being a bloody coward. Ah, well... I won't waste your time with more of my rant. *wry grin*
I do like your story very much, and I'm glad that you were able to get the new chapter done. I look forward to the next chapter whenever you can fit writing for fun time into your busy schedule.
Well Done!
Yay to updates!! poor Harry, im so glad that he has Severus to look after him :D
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