|
|
Reviews For Sacrifices
And a wonderfully-detailed exposition of the Black family and the interactions between the three sisters-- this is the first time I've ever seen anyone tackle that particular subject, and you did a magnificent job! Descriptions, emotions, characterizations-- WONDERFUL throughout! Then there's Lucius' descriptions of false friends who only keep you around until you are no longer useful to them-- BOY, have I been victimized by people like that multiple times through the years. Even though it's Lucius who is doing the telling, and I NEVER thought I'd be in agreement with HIM, he's absolutely correct in THEORY, if not in application to the Weasleys. And Dumbledore spying on Sev and Ophelia-- tsk tsk! I couldn't quite understand at first WHY Sev thought someone was there, unless he had a sixth sense of being watched, until you explained about the muffled sound. Whoa! Just goes to show what TALENT he has at discerning something so nebulous as a difference in sound, which most of us would never even register. AMAZING! Sorry it took me so long to review this chapter again. I tried on my phone when you first posted, and the review didn't post, so I decided to try again from the library computer. Can't wait for the next update! :-) Author's Response: Now, it's my turn to apologize for the delay in responding to your review! So sorry! Thank you for your review! I'm thrilled you enjoyed the chapter, and especially the Black Family section. Lucius is correct about people using others. Everyone does it at some point. (And as I've mentioned before several times, the Malfoy Family - considering them as one big complex character here - are my favorites in the whole series.) I'm hoping to write several chapters before I post the next few so it may take a little while. Hope to hear from you again. Thanks, again for your review! SOrry it took me so long to respond! ~ RK |
|
Powered by eFiction 3.5 |