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Title: Chapter 34 - Martyrdom & Mercy 24 Mar 2013 9:07 pm
Reviewer: kelmore (Signed) [Report This]
    Not because it was exactly evil, but more because she herself could not do it.

    that wasnt why she hated magic. she hated it because her sister and friend used 'accidental magic' to violate her privacy just because she had a letter from the magic world!

    than when she saw what magic was doing to her sister mind when she defended snape to her lilly was dead, she became a freak like how a undead is a freak of nature.

    to me petunia has every right to hate magic and lilly. not harry though.

    Author's Response: Interesting points...Petunia is an interesting character in her paranoid, jealous way.  Thank you for reading. Sorry my response took so darned long! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 34 - Martyrdom & Mercy 30 Mar 2012 10:03 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, what a very sad chapter... Poor Ophelia-- and poor Tevin, who will obviously blame himself for the accident which (presumably) led to her death. Even if he is made to understand about the Vow, it's going to be tough going for little Tevin. Poor Severus, for the pain he's experiencing, and poor Arabella-- what an awful way to go, and poor Mister Snowflake. To top it off, poor Remus, for having to impersonate Arabella-- and how exactly are the kneazles going to react to a werewolf living in their home??! This I've got to see! Well, kneazles are supposed to be intelligent, so maybe it'll work out... Hmmm... HOPE it works out! I can certainly appreciate how difficult it was to write this chapter, but you did an excellent job! Looking forward to the next update already! :-)

    Author's Response:

    Yes, it is an emotionally intense chapter.  Thank you for your review.  Nice to hear from you again! :) Thanks for the compliments.  They certainly make me smile.  Hope to hear from you again, soon.  ~ RK

Title: Chapter 34 - Martyrdom & Mercy 30 Mar 2012 1:05 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    how did she break her vow???? She didnt tell anyone?? she didnt do anything on purpose... I am a bit confused

    Author's Response:

    I was hoping this wouldn't be too confusing.  Sorry that you are.  Here we go; hope this helps:

    The part of her vow that she violated was: "Will you...[put] Tevin's safety and well-being above that of all others..." By ignoring the injuries of the boys and bringing Arabella to get help before them she violated that part of her vow.  Even if it isn't on purpose, the wording of the vow would not take into account intention or accident, especially if she is present at the time that Tevin requires need of safety or care.  The cold black & white logic of the thing is that Tevin was injured, she ignored it, thus did not put his safety and well-being above all others - in this case Arabella's, which is why the vow determined that it was broken. 

    Does that make sense?  I hope so. 

    Thank you for reading and leaving a review!  Hope to hear from you again!

    ~ RK

Title: Chapter 34 - Martyrdom & Mercy 29 Mar 2012 10:19 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    What a sad chapter! Please update again soon!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, it was a tough one to finally get out there.  But there is definitely more to come.  There's a total of 40 chapters to this story.  Working on the last edits of the last few chapters now.  Updates will arrive as soon as possible.  Thank you for still reading and reviewing!  ~ RK


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