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Reviews For Sacrifices
This story is truly magical... # spoilers please be aware I'll be talking about some important parts in this story that may ruin your experience if you did not yet read it. I normally hate reading biological father Snape because it usually involves infidelity which makes Lily look bad, and although I was worried at the start you proved me wrong. I’ll start with writing. Your writing is very smooth, beautifully descriptive, and strong throughout. I like how you tackled some concepts that can be hard to justify or explain, and authors usually avoid. For example, Tevin lived under Dumbledore’s nose but was not yet discovered, your solution was simple yet effective; changing his eye colors (even though this broke my heart) (we've seen it done before in the sixth book when Hermoine changes Harry's eyebrow color) as well as changing his name and introducing Ophelia as his pseudo mother truly conceals his Identity! The characters in this story were also amazing, true to their canon characterization given this AU, and very complex... You also know how to develop a character! I was especially fond of your build-up of Remus and the Malfoys ( I always thought these characters had huge potential that was wasted in the novel). and your original characters were also very amazing. I love every one of them! The friendship between the Malfoys and Snapes was heartwarming and endearing, they accept their differences and work with them… you address some important problems while being realistic about it. the friendship between Harry and Draco is just beautiful. I really wish you’d consider finishing this phenomenal piece and hopefully follow it with another installment… there are many questions that are yet to be answered .. and I really want to see more of these characters' adventures. Please consider updating this again… I’ll looking forward to it.! P.s. if you have any original work please let us know … I’ll look forward to reading it. Sorry I keep editing my review, I just can’t stop thinking of this story, and whenever I reread what I write I feel it’s inadequate XD.
Author's Response: It has been a while, real life interfering non-stop over here, but the rest of this saga is coming soon! Thank you for reading and reviewing. Glad you like it so much! ~ RK
Author's Response: Thank you! Fred & George have a small part in this story, but they are fun while they're around. Things will be a little tense at the Burrow and Ron and Tevin's first meeting, that is for sure. That will occur next chapter. Hope to hear from you again when I keep going. Only a few chapters left! Agh! I'm shooting to have this beast finished by the end of July. Stay tuned. Thanks for reviewing! ~ RK |
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