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Title: Prologue & Chapter 1 - Of Unknown Locations 14 Aug 2012 5:54 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    An interesting start. I liked the way you portrayed the Dursleys. Even if Petunia didn't like the direction Lily's life took, one would think she would feel some grief and confusion over her sister's murder. I'm glad you showed that aspect of her.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I think Petunia can be a rather interesting character, and it is a shame that JKR only focused on her jealousy over Lily's being a witch more than other "human" aspects she could have demonstrated.  Petunia will be back...WAY later, but she will appear again.  Thank you for reviewing. ~ RK
Title: Prologue & Chapter 1 - Of Unknown Locations 11 Aug 2012 6:25 am
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey this was really good! I can't believe I only just found his story now:)

    I look foward to reading more.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I dont' mind that you just discovered the story.  (I discover a whole gaggle of new ones all the time and they could be several years old!)  I hope you enjoy what the last few chapters hold.  Thanks for reviewing! ~ RK
Title: Prologue & Chapter 1 - Of Unknown Locations 06 Apr 2012 2:21 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Promising

    Author's Response: Thank you.  Hope you stick with it. ~ RK
Title: Prologue & Chapter 1 - Of Unknown Locations 28 Oct 2009 2:48 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Hm, it is a bit odd - why leave Harry there in the middle of night if Dumble went there first thing in the morning? Otherwise I liked this first chapter *went to read on* Mila

    Author's Response: Well!  That is a stumper of a question isn't it?  Having known about the whole Petunia/Lily and their strained relationship due to magic thing, I'm sure that Dumbledore would have left Harry on the doorstep so that magic-hating Petunia and Vernon would take him in, without coming face to face with a full-grown witch/wizard.  If he were there, it would almost be like he was forcing Harry onto them, rather than trusting them to make the right decision to take him in themselves.  He would go back the next day to check that this semi-guilty-conscience plan would have worked and to make sure that they in fact did take him in.  And so, poor Dumbledore when he gets the surprise that Harry never made it past the doorstep of the Dursley home.  Thanks for the review and I hope to hear from you again!  ~ RK
Title: Prologue & Chapter 1 - Of Unknown Locations 24 Aug 2009 11:34 pm
Reviewer: salazarschild (Signed) [Report This]
    awesome story write more

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I was actually about to update!  So you will be getting a bonus!  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Prologue & Chapter 1 - Of Unknown Locations 12 Aug 2009 2:11 am
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think severus did the right thing.

    Author's Response: Thank you.  Glad you are on Severus' side!  Thanks for the revview and the reading! 

    Author's Response: Thank you.  Glad you are on Severus' side!  Thanks for the revview and the reading! 
Title: Prologue & Chapter 1 - Of Unknown Locations 06 Aug 2009 5:42 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    That was very nicely done. Your descriptions are quite lengthy and vivid--I look forward to reading the next chapter.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review and compliment!  I hope when you say "lengthy," it implies that it is a good thing.  Thanks for reading...Looking forward to more reviews from you!  Thank you!
Title: Prologue & Chapter 1 - Of Unknown Locations 04 Aug 2009 2:06 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh interesting beginning. Wonder where Harry is.

    Hmm...she is still lying about Lily and James' deaths, isn't she?

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!  Yes, Petunia is definitely still lying about James' and Lily's deaths.  Keep reading, and you'll find out where Harry is. 
Title: Prologue & Chapter 1 - Of Unknown Locations 03 Aug 2009 7:05 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Intriguing start. I like the non-canon element.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Hope you continue reading!  Reviews make me happy, and I am happy right now...
Title: Prologue & Chapter 1 - Of Unknown Locations 03 Aug 2009 5:16 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Now I can review your story. Ahhmmm

    This was really freaking amazing!! I absolutely LOVE your prologue!!Loved everything about it actually. Very good!

    Author's Response: I was hoping you would review!  Yayness!  I hope my story pleases you as much as yours pleases me!  Thank you for the review!  Things get complicated as it goes before things get...well, I won't say.  Can't give too much away, now can I?  Hopefully, now that I will be able to update now, I will not become lax in leaving reviews for you, my dear, though they may be slightly less substantial...*grin* 

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