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Reviews For Sacrifices
Author's Response: Sorry it's a little slow. Details are fun. :) The finished story totals in at 40 chapters. Thanks! ~ RK
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy it came across as tender and cute Severus & baby Harry interaction. I was nervous about writing a young, young child. Yes, they both need something, but it may take a while to figure out that they both just need each other. The stuffed animals represent two of the characters and are Harry's comfort items. One was his daddy's and the other his mommy's. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! And thank you for the review! ~ RK
Author's Response: He will. He's a little overwhelmed right now, though. But the patience will come. Thanks for reading/reviewing. (By the way...no idea what happened in my first response to you. Something was a little whacky there...)
I love how you write Severus (I assume), so unsure of how to calm an agitated child and taking all the trouble to find out how. And then actually saying to Harry, "Daddy's bear". I don't know if he hated James in this story, but it must have been hard for him to do that. You are such a beautiful writer. Off to read some more. Author's Response: Oh thank you! Yes, I want to portray Severus as more unsure of himself since he is younger. And huzzah for noticing the bear remarks. There is a bit more to that bear. Thank you for reading/reviewing!
-P.G. Author's Response: Thank you again for another review! Agh! Yes, at times I am very purposefully vague. And yes, you are correct that Severus owned the bear initially, and that Harry had the bear before this chapter. Huzzah! Ten points to you! Yes, the red hangings do belong to Severus, but the reason for that is given WAY later...And thank you for the compliment, and your excitement. I'm excited when people review, so if I can get people excited...I get excited! Thanks!
"It will be taken." Love the ambiguity of that lien... Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you picked up on that line. I figured she would be all cryptic like that. And more will be revealed about the kidnapper soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like it! Just finished reviewing your latest chapter actually.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you for your review! Before we find out what happened to the boy though, we'll be visiting a few new characters. Two of them are very important to the story so a lot needs to be said about him. Glad you are enjoying it so far.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I have a bunch of chapters written, but my time is very limited, so chapters at first will be rather fast in coming. Thank you for your review! I'm so excited that someone's reading....AND REVIEWING! Agh! |
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