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Title: Chapter 2 - Uncertainty 06 Apr 2012 3:14 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    A bit slow, I guess you are aiming for a really long story :)

    Author's Response:

    Sorry it's a little slow.  Details are fun.  :)  The finished story totals in at 40 chapters.  Thanks!  ~ RK

Title: Chapter 2 - Uncertainty 11 Nov 2009 12:58 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    This is the most touching Severus/baby Harry chapter I have read in a very long time. Both needing but now quite sure what, and then the swan......security to Harry, his love for Lily to Severus. Very touching.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy it came across as tender and cute Severus & baby Harry interaction.  I was nervous about writing a young, young child.  Yes, they both need something, but it may take a while to figure out that they both just need each other.  The stuffed animals represent two of the characters and are Harry's comfort items.  One was his daddy's and the other his mommy's.  Glad you enjoyed the chapter!  And thank you for the review! ~ RK
Title: Chapter 2 - Uncertainty 12 Aug 2009 2:22 am
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    cute chapeter, but severus better learn some patiences if he plans to raise a child

    Author's Response: He will.  He's a little overwhelmed right now, though.  But the patience will come.  Thanks for reading/reviewing.   (By the way...no idea what happened in my first response to you.  Something was a little whacky there...) 
Title: Chapter 2 - Uncertainty 08 Aug 2009 4:30 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was so sweet and so sad.

    I love how you write Severus (I assume), so unsure of how to calm an agitated child and taking all the trouble to find out how.

    And then actually saying to Harry, "Daddy's bear". I don't know if he hated James in this story, but it must have been hard for him to do that.

    You are such a beautiful writer. Off to read some more.

    Author's Response: Oh thank you!  Yes, I want to portray Severus as more unsure of himself since he is younger.  And huzzah for noticing the bear remarks.  There is a bit more to that bear.  Thank you for reading/reviewing!
Title: Chapter 2 - Uncertainty 06 Aug 2009 6:03 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm...I get the feeling you are being purposefully vague here. I'm not 100 percent sure who the man is. The raggedness of the bear suggests that Severus was the previous owner and Harry owned the bear before now, so is Harry really Sev's? Did Severus survive? You mentioned something about maroon wall-hangings though, which I don't think would belong to Severus. Very interesting. I find that I have to read this very closely or I'll miss some very important detail (which is a big compliment because most fanfics you can read without putting much thought into them). I'm very excited about where this fic is going.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you again for another review!  Agh!  Yes, at times I am very purposefully vague.  And yes, you are correct that Severus owned the bear initially, and that Harry had the bear before this chapter.  Huzzah!  Ten points to you!  Yes, the red hangings do belong to Severus, but the reason for that is given WAY later...And thank you for the compliment, and your excitement.  I'm excited when people review, so if I can get people excited...I get excited!  Thanks!

Title: Chapter 2 - Uncertainty 03 Aug 2009 7:07 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It gets more intriguing. We now know the kidnapper.

    "It will be taken." Love the ambiguity of that lien...

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm glad you picked up on that line.  I figured she would be all cryptic like that.  And more will be revealed about the kidnapper soon. 
Title: Chapter 2 - Uncertainty 03 Aug 2009 5:53 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! Again, another wonderful chapter! I'm afraid you're putting me to shame!lol No, but really very good!!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Glad you like it!  Just finished reviewing your latest chapter actually.

Title: Chapter 2 - Uncertainty 03 Aug 2009 1:24 am
Reviewer: amainage (Signed) [Report This]
    nice look forward to see what happens to the boy, nice chap.

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you for your review!  Before we find out what happened to the boy though, we'll be visiting a few new characters.  Two of them are very important to the story so a lot needs to be said about him.  Glad you are enjoying it so far.
Title: Chapter 2 - Uncertainty 03 Aug 2009 12:33 am
Reviewer: Doewke (Anonymous) [Report This]
    absolutely loved it!! can't wait for more....

    Author's Response: Oh, thanks!  I have a bunch of chapters written, but my time is very limited, so chapters at first will be rather fast in coming.  Thank you for your review!  I'm so excited that someone's reading....AND REVIEWING!  Agh!

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